Hm, very angsty though it was a little ackward in places so that was a tad distracting. Otherwise though, I did enjoy it. Nice job.

i really like your poem, it's really deep, the ones that contains meaning within. i try to write like that... but my friend thinks they're lame... good story!

good story! good descriptive writing

hope you'll update soon and i hope the story will have a happy ending

i love happy endings

I thought this was a beautiful story. Your writing is so inspiring. It has so many descriptive words and I don't know it's just great!

turned out great. i really enjoyed the detial put into this fic. and wanted to congratulate you...

aaww how sad. You write really well And for some reason that seems to fit well with the whole ceres thing. great job

This is beautiful. You write really well and I don't think it's that angsty. Good work, keep it up!

Wow..an interesting story..too bad 'Tooya' died in dis story..( anyways, i give it a two thumbs up! Nice job and keep up the good work!

hey...dis is pretty gud. (Oh poor Yuuhi! Let me comfort you!) anyways, i rily like the poem at the end. I hope there will be an update soon...

This is a great work, Les-chan! You should keep up writing good fics. Someday, you might become one of the highly-praised authors all over the world. Not like me. I don't know how to write such great ones but I'm trying to... Hehe.-

I had a wonderful time reading this even though I don't know the whole story of Ayashi no Ceres.

Anyway, good luck! :P

beautifully written...

lovely poem and wonderfully described.

Nice fic hope u make another chappie and cool poem loved it.

My poor Yuuhi ;-;

Great story! Beautifully written. The poem in the end was very good :)

_ This is good! I liked your descriptions. One thing, though, the characters sound to...formal, or something like it, when they talk. I really liked the ending!

kekekeke...great fanfic man...keep up the good work...

great piece of work

hehehehehe...plz update and add more

i wanna see wot happens next la

kekekekkekekeke

thanks la