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tanisha
2005-08-24 . chapter 9
2 years, 2 years, u haven't updated in two years. what are u trying to do, kill me. the anticipatin is bad enough, but knowing that u probebly abandoned this really really great story is like signing away your freedom, and selling it to ur mom. please, for my sake update soon. the story is great, really great, and it would be really great if u update SOON. so please,please, update soon.

love urs truely,
tanisha
animegurl_23
2003-12-05 . chapter 2
GREAT STORY SO FAR!
I ALSO THINK THAT "THE END OF THE CHAPTER TALK SHOW" IS FUNNY!
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! ^_^
kyona
2003-11-10 . chapter 9
i love this story please wright more. oh and alot more goku/chi chi stories please. your so good at it. please
thank you...(cheezy smile)...
daydreamer5290
2003-05-18 . chapter 1
WoW! Great story! Its so sweet...hehe...funny 2...you've got 2 keep on updating...bi*
Taiin
2003-04-25 . chapter 10
Aw this fiction iz so sweet(sorry gurl side of me took over) NE way, its great. I'm gonna add it 2 my favorites list. I hope u update soon. ^_^
Nisha
2003-01-23 . chapter 9
'Bout time they kissed! Yet another cute one!
Catnip
2003-01-18 . chapter 9
good greif what the hell was that The Real World? No guy is THAT romantic, not unless they're **. My advice to you try to make it seem a little more real, at least by their standards. Goku is romantic in other ways besides hot tubs, roses, and candles. And I think Chi Chi is a little to modest to be wearing a string bikini. Also theres the deal with the capsule house. It sounds nice, but do you really think that while traveling over the vast earth two peole would really be living in a mini-mansion. I don't think so. Well that's my review
chi-chi
2003-01-18 . chapter 9
this is realy good update soon thay are falling in love this is get i hope thay get chi-chi's dad back
chi-chi
2003-01-12 . chapter 8
i'm glad you are back and i hope you up date soon and what will chi-chi like about that room pls. update soon or i will go crazy and that is not pretty
Gohansfav1
2003-01-06 . chapter 8
HEY I LOVE IT!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
Nisha
2003-01-05 . chapter 8
Ah that was great! Why don't you have more reviews. These people need to get off of their asses and read this! Okay maybe they should stay on their butts cause you'd be at a computer and all but gee you get the point. Update soon as in not later than 2 months...that drives me batty!
Nisha
2003-01-05 . chapter 7
That was cute
Nisha
2003-01-05 . chapter 4
I love it when people don't make Goku sound like an idiot!
Nisha
2003-01-05 . chapter 2
Haha Animaniacs with that cute little kid. What was her name? Mindy or something like that I dunno...
Nisha
2003-01-05 . chapter 1
Haha you sounded like Charles Dickens in the first paragraph. "It was the best of times, it was the worst of times..." This is a nice fic and I'm glad I came to check it out.
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