great story

nice story!

kudos!

Please we really want to read a sequal.

I really like this story. Please write a sequal.

Oh, cool, someone else who likes to torture poor Sam. He's so cute. I'm so happy to hear about a sequel. Do you mind it I hazzard a guess about the picture and the secret? The 4th person in the picture is not a cousin, is it? Maybe an older sibling with the same problem? Maybe a "late" older sibling?
:-) Just a guess. Either way I love this and look forward to reading the sequel.

Nightengale

Please do a sequel soon. I really would like to find out the significance of the photo, what happens to Abbey?
So many questions still unanswered, this is not THE X Files.

Good work, this was highly enjoyable. And please do a sequel quickly

This story has definitly went on my "Favorite Stories" list! I was just glued to it. You really should write a sequel. I'm dying to know about the photo and why he was so secretive about his asthma. Please, please, PLEASE write a sequel!
~horse-girl

Firstly, thanks so much for the review, cheered me up loads. Second, I NEED A SEQUEL! I like ESF too (maybe I'm a little sadistic) and this one's great. The charcterisation, I think, is excellent. But so many loose ends! PLEASE write a sequel!

I love ESF, and I haven't had a fix in quite some time. Great job, and I hope you write the sequel.

Great Story, I really hope you do a sequel cause I want to know what the picture meant!

Loved it! 'bout time we had some good ESF, it's been a while.

Your story was amazing, completely believable ans well written I love every word of it. You need to write a sequal. Please I'm begging here.

Really good! I do hope you are going to continue. What is the story behind the photo? A death from asthma or a death due to someone elses asthma! Please don't let this be yet another unfinished ESF!

Ooh, do a sequel. I'm really curious and really liked this story!