I like your story :)

This part should not move so fast through the story. Give more details.

i liked this story

very well done!:) keep up the good work

That was an excellent story. I couldn't have done better myself. I like how you sucessfully combined many seasons into one! I liked all of your little comments too! :) I hope you keep writing! :)

Wow...this was really great. Did this really happen? I am a Sailor Moon fan, but I don't know too much about it. I've read some other stuff on this subject and I find myself wondering if this really happened in the show. So, if anyone could tell me I'd really appreciate it. Anyhoo, wonderful story! Write more!

Nice detail.

Always room for jokes, you know. There's never too much laughter. -

Not that great, are you nuts! This is totally awesome!

Dude...this is really good. Keep writing!

I wish I could write like you. This is awesome!

AWESOME!

Again, too awesome for words!

This is sooooooo awesome! I can't wait to read the rest! -

Very cute story! The AN were cute too!- loved them and the story Write more soon!