*snif*

That was so wonderful ;_; So cute and simply fantastic! I'm a obsessed Laguna/Raine Fan.

I love your story.

Keep up the good work b

Simple elegant and touching, almost un-Laguna-like, :D (but in a good way) The balance of feeling and thought, it brought out the best of his quiet side. Wonderfully written!

One thing to check..

Julia [Heartily] could keep me pinned in one

"Heartilly"

Beautiful! Abosulutely beautiful! You've portrayed Laguna in the wonderful light of a philosopher without him being the adorable dim-witted guy we all see in the game, and Raine as his ultimate goal and honorary treasure.

beautiful. That's all i have to say. Beautiful. ;P Not your best work but still. .

Very nice. I think you did a great job with Laguna's character and his descriptions of Raine.

Good.Very very good.Write more Laguna stories!

After reading fics like this, I honestly don't know what to say. Except that I must read more fics from you. Thank you.

Astarte,

This story is an example of why I have eagerly looked forward to your writing ever since I first read "One Day". Like that story, it is an introspection, written in the character's voice. You have captured Laguna exceptionally well in this story. I definitely look forward to the next tale, and look forward to our next opportunity to work together!

Another excellent fic. Just like every other fic of yours that I've read. And after that, what else can I say really?

I think you did a wonderful job with this.

Poor Laguna. You always write him so well. As always...this was very good.

I like it. I really like it.

Wow! How utterly beautiful! I loved it! Please keep writing!

This is so beautiful. Their romance is much sweeter than Squall and Rinoa's. We all surely know that, right? Keep it up...!

Wow. I think you really captured the feeling,if you don't mind my saying so. I really think this fic is a classic must-read!