I have truly enjoyed reading this story so far. I hope that all goes well for Sarah and Jareth. Would there be a way that Sarah and her family could remember what happened when time is set back to before the attack? Is Karen one of Jareth's subjects? How did she get involved with Robert then? Who is Robert's sister who gave herself to save her brother? If they killed the witch now then reset time, woulsd she come back?

I hope that you'll be able to update soon. I really do like this story.

I'm sorry to hear about your past personal experience and I hope that you have been able to move past the horrible experience in your life. I won't be nosely and ask about any of it. Although, I would like you bother you about the full version of Dan's torture as I would really like to read it. Very good story by the way.

That's so so sad!! Are you gonna update this story?

Why don't you get Ludo to summon rocks to squish Brenna? Although that's slightly too kind a punishment for her.

Making a man experience childbirth, best punishment EVER! DAN F*G DESERVES TO DIE! My emotions may be a little strong but Dan's actions have brought up painful memories for me.

I wasn't too amused with this story. The fact that you used names of Celtic Gods and Goddesses was quite good. But as far as the dreams from the draft in the story I found entirely disturbing. I thought I was going to have a happier story than this but it just messed with my head.

*sigh* When are you going to update this? *wants to know what happens next*

-paces back and forth until a new chapter is up-

YAY!

How sad. Just when Jareth and Sarah are happy in each other's arms it might all be thrown away. It's so depressing.

Just as I thought things are turning brighter.. you drop as right into a pit of darkness! :( waiting for next bit.. :)

10 to 1 Alana isn't his wife...right?

i love it keep up the great work please please update soon

yeah great chapter can't wait for more so please update again and soon.

very good

I am interested to find out if it's all real or not. I loik forward to your next update! Ja ne!