  DiscordantHarmony 2008-03-20 . chapter 12*sigh* When are you going to update this? *wants to know what happens next* |
| DemonicSymphony 2007-04-30 . chapter 12 -paces back and forth until a new chapter is up-
YAY! |
| Miharu Kawashi 2007-04-28 . chapter 12 How sad. Just when Jareth and Sarah are happy in each other's arms it might all be thrown away. It's so depressing. |
| Sofasoap 2007-04-27 . chapter 12 Just as I thought things are turning brighter.. you drop as right into a pit of darkness! :( waiting for next bit.. :) |
| Crystal Shores 2007-04-24 . chapter 3 10 to 1 Alana isn't his wife...right? |
| Shanz 2007-04-21 . chapter 12 i love it keep up the great work please please update soon |
| beauty0102 2007-04-20 . chapter 12 yeah great chapter can't wait for more so please update again and soon. |
| notwritten 2007-04-19 . chapter 12 very good |
| Miharu Kawashi 2006-10-12 . chapter 11 I am interested to find out if it's all real or not. I loik forward to your next update! Ja ne! |
| RagamuffinSundrop 2006-10-06 . chapter 11 Please don't let it be reality. Jareth and Sarah belong together. I thought they did when I was a child and I still do now |
| RagamuffinSundrop 2006-10-06 . chapter 4 I suspected he was family but that was a nice way to do it. |
| PICTUREHOUSE 2006-08-27 . chapter 11 this is really good. she aint really dead is she. please give us more! |
| BlackLadyCharon 2006-08-10 . chapter 11 *Twitches, an annoyed look on her face.* You. Had. Better. Not. Leave. Me. HANGING! *Bellow is loud enough that even Seiryu is hiding.* There had better be more to this, woman!
Seiryu: I think she'd like you to update. |
| ravenrose66 2006-08-04 . chapter 11 Love the story, please keep updating, I can't wait to find out what is going to happen |
| Sofasoap 2006-08-04 . chapter 11 Thank you for the update! what a cliffhanger you left us @_@... |
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