Ouu good story! You should update the rest :P I wanna know what happens. Update soon! :D

Brilliant. Absaloutly brilliant. Your choice of words and the way you express the characters is brilliant. Are you sure your not just some famous world author in disguise in order to take a break from editors?

Yep. James is definately the old Scrooge. What's his name again? Ah, well. It's a really good start, and I hope you keep going.
Great job!
P.S. When's Lily coming back?

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Excellently written! A few phrases you could fix, here and there, but on the whole, very good! Hopefully you'll post the next chapter of this, along with one of Predictability.

Excellent story! This was a great and creative spin on "an old classic"! I hope you find time soon to continue!

"Nutters, the whole lot o' 'em. Nothin' spectacular about drooling toddlers. Now, come on, boy, want to lose to me in chess or review your Latin declensions?"

Oh. My. GOD!!! THIS FREAKING RULES!!! I'm in love with this fic. It's so...gah! GOOD!!! I'm very sorry to see that you haven't updated since it's creation...DON'T LET THIS ONE DIE, 'cause it's a keeper. If it dies, I go down with it!! Anyway, your writing style is absolutely superb, witty and funny to match the tone of the fic, and words seem to really like you. Oh, you're not very nice, are you? Because you're too talented. Stop being so darn talented at writing. Meh.

*gets over jealousy* *looks over previous reviews* Geez...your flamer(s) are absolutely bonkers. They are bad people. Very bad people for hating this. I might have to kill them, yes, I might. Or badly maim them at least. Hmm, preciouss...*goes into a GollumSchitzo mode*

Anyway, as you might have been able to tell from my horribly hyper and disorganized review (I stink at reviews) that I adore this fic, and really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really REALLY do NOT want to see it die. I'd really really really...well, you get the point--like you to update. Soon. Preferrably now. I'm putting this on my favorites, so I'll be keeping tabs on it...

Best,
Miri

I loved the story, but it has only one flaw. I really can't imagine James as Scrooge. Especially the 'bah, Humbug' part. I can't imagine my beloved James being...you know.

You hope you did Charles Dickens justice! ARE YOU INSANE!????!! YOUR STORY IS HORRIBLE! You are an embarrasment to the human society! YOU DON'T DESERVE TO LIVE! How DO you live with yourslef? And It's past New Year's and you haven't even gone past the 1st chapter!! HAHA! You're horrible! You should be ashamed of yourself, turning Charles Dickens' story into such a disgusting piece of filth!!!!

yulin...i have seen ur better works. you have more potential then that I MEAN COME ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yulin...i have seen ur better works. you have more potential then that I MEAN COME ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yulin...i have seen ur better works. you have more potential then that I MEAN COME ON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*grins* This is good, and it makes our wittle James very believable in the part as Scrooge.

*sniggers* I can't wait for Christmas Past, whenever he see's Lily. ^^V I actually liked this play. Too bad I'm afraid I may end up Scrooge. *frowns* They actually called me the Grinch and Scrooge this Christmas. ^^V Oh well!

Well, I do hope you continue before the winter season is over with. Because then it'd be spring. *laughs* Just kidding. I'm the slowest updater known to man.

Cheers!

Hiya! You should have guessed who I am by now. I just start posting some of my works on fanfiction. (I don't know why myself.) I want you to comment on my works. If you have time, that is. Thanks!

good. I like all of the details! ~Allison