Wow, this is great. I really wish you'd continue it!

this is a great story i hope you update it soon
-RMSOBlue

intresting i hope maya hooks up with eliot there cute together
-RMSOBlue

Maya and Elliot should be together by now and continue the story

Yo-hai! This was great! Can't wait for the next chappie!

I don't feel like logging in... (yawn)

Anyway, this is good. Elliot seems nice. Update soon!

This would be a great story if you make it a Maya/Finch instead of Maya/Elliott. Keep up the good work.

I thought that was a good story. I beg of you- update! You left it hanging. And as for those complaining about the ages and stuff- it's a what if story. It doesn't have to follow any rules.

Hey, no offense but you should add more detail as to how they do things!ARGH!

Come on you should be able to write a little better for a 14 yr old. Again no offense.

Are you telling me that Maya is younger than everyone else? Why couldn't you have made Dennis the youngest? Or at LEAST the same age as Maya. And uh, Nina is MUCH OLDER than all of them apart from Jack. FIX IT WHILE YOU'RE STILL ALIVE! Argh!

I think the story was great

Well how young is Jack supposed to be? He's already too young of how old Maya is! GEEZ! And also, WHEN IS THE AUTHOR GOING TO UPDATE THIS?

This story sucks! This isn't a good idea!

Lol, thanks for that last A/N. Lol. Not exactly what I meant, but I guess it's close enough. I kinda meant IN the story. You know, like, in the beginning. Too much dialog.

Not to be all picky, but just to tell you, Nina's surname is Van Horn and Elliot(t)'s is DiMauro. I've liked this idea, but why is Jack so OLD still? XD Anyway.. Are you the person from the Syndicated Website Board, because someone had that idea once..