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| 101spacemonkey 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseI love the letter at the end and the fact that Jesse tried to make it all sound mroe dramatic... granted it was dramatic! I think the letter was a nice way to finish. |
| Anna 2007-05-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat Story! Keep up the good work! |
| epalladino 2007-03-18 ch 1, | abuseThis was a way cute story. Thanks for posting, Beth Palladino |
| Lucy234 2005-09-03 ch 1, | abuseGreat job! I really enjoyed the story! |
| Souless-tears 2005-08-14 ch 1, | abuseSo funny, and the mob too, great. |
| Jesse'sBIGGEST!Fan 2004-03-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis story was so good, but again, just make the bad guys bad guys. I don't particularly care for bad guys with a soft heart. Keep your stories coming (and keep 'em Jesse-filled)! ~Jesse'sBIGGEST!Fan |
| get-it-on65 2003-04-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is my favorite fanfiction out of all you're stories, write another one like this, it's good, fanfiction is so frikin addictive! Luv, Cesca, x |
| jacarandadm 2002-12-27 ch 1, | abuseYour story is very good, especially the dialogues, the slang with which the bad guys talk. What's missing, in my opinion, are descriptions of the surroundings. They'd underline the moods more. |
| Trolley 2002-12-26 ch 1, | abuseHey, Jen! Where've you been girl? I haven't heard from you in awhile! Good to see you back here, and you're story's still great! Alana |
| wuemsel 2002-12-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseHeya! I already read your story - Can´t remember if here or on another side. I really LOVED it! It´s were funny, and the dialoges are excellent!!! |
| C. T. Torris 2002-12-25 ch 1, | abuseHillariously funny! I loved it. |
| Cass 2002-12-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseI really liked this story. I liked it the first time around, too! It was funny (I especially liked the two goons arguing, although the vein of humour throughout was great), it was articulate and I'd love to see more from this author. |