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Reviews For: Healing the Mob

101spacemonkey
2008-05-11
ch 1,
abuseI love the letter at the end and the fact that Jesse tried to make it all sound mroe dramatic... granted it was dramatic!

I think the letter was a nice way to finish.
Anna
2007-05-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseGreat Story! Keep up the good work!
epalladino
2007-03-18
ch 1,
abuseThis was a way cute story. Thanks for posting, Beth Palladino
Lucy234
2005-09-03
ch 1,
abuseGreat job! I really enjoyed the story!
Souless-tears
2005-08-14
ch 1,
abuseSo funny, and the mob too, great.
Jesse'sBIGGEST!Fan
2004-03-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseThis story was so good, but again, just make the bad guys bad guys. I don't particularly care for bad guys with a soft heart. Keep your stories coming (and keep 'em Jesse-filled)!
~Jesse'sBIGGEST!Fan
get-it-on65
2003-04-20
ch 1,
abuseThis is my favorite fanfiction out of all you're stories, write another one like this, it's good, fanfiction is so frikin addictive!
Luv, Cesca, x
jacarandadm
2002-12-27
ch 1,
abuseYour story is very good, especially the dialogues, the slang with which the bad guys talk.
What's missing, in my opinion, are descriptions of the surroundings. They'd underline the moods more.
Trolley
2002-12-26
ch 1,
abuseHey, Jen! Where've you been girl? I haven't heard from you in awhile! Good to see you back here, and you're story's still great!
Alana
wuemsel
2002-12-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseHeya! I already read your story - Can´t remember if here or on another side. I really LOVED it! It´s were funny, and the dialoges are excellent!!!
C. T. Torris
2002-12-25
ch 1,
abuseHillariously funny! I loved it.
Cass
2002-12-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseI really liked this story. I liked it the first time around, too! It was funny (I especially liked the two goons arguing, although the vein of humour throughout was great), it was articulate and I'd love to see more from this author.
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