 Paper Caper 4/21/01 . chapter 2 Hey, I didn't realize you put the next chapter up! *sheepish grin* Wow, this was awesome! EEK! It's a cliffhanger! Please continue or you'll leave me hanging until I fall! *realizes what a bad metaphor she wrote and grins again* But please continue it, it's really good! -Char :c) |
 raquel 3/7/01 . chapter 1 Awsome as always you go melody! Keep up the good work :) |
 Melissa 1/25/01 . chapter 1 Awesome story! I just can't stand cliffhangers like those though! ) Please post soon! I can't wait to see the next part! Keep it up! |
 Snow'sLuckyCat 1/24/01 . chapter 1AWESOME! No Wait...SuperCOOL!
I loved this...You must continue this fic...What happens? I'm dying to know... Please write some more soon...The first part was kinda scary, but way cool too...KEEP IT UP! ; ) oh i got to put this one up on my faves...And you're on there too. I hope you don't mind me doing that... |
 Aurelia Violet 1/19/01 . chapter 1Hmm, I reviewed the old one, too, I thought the spacing was fine. Anyways, awesome continuation of Revenge! I wanna see what happens next! Totally cool! -Char :c) |
 Vykky 12/24/00 . chapter 1 Well, you got my attention. It's interesting and compelling so far, but...where's the rest? Write more, it's good so far! |
 Gary's Girl 12/12/00 . chapter 1 CONTINUE! :) |
 Aurelia Violet 12/6/00 . chapter 1Ok, I know I already reviewed this, but I'm dying to see what happens next! Please continue! |
 Kerstin 11/24/00 . chapter 1hey hun! that was the best story you've written so far. i can't wait to see what happens next! i hope you get it finished soon. i don't know what to write, so i won't bore you. i can beta read your next half of the story if you want me to though, k? well, luv ya and keep up the good work! :-D |
 Lilas 11/23/00 . chapter 1Dude... You ahve GOT to write the next part! Was someone strangling him? Huh? COME ON! WRITE! *small voice* Please? |
 Sparky 11/23/00 . chapter 1 Wow! Amaizing so far! Hurry and write part 2! |
 Jessica 11/17/00 . chapter 1 One word... WOW! That was very, very good. You have to write more soon before the suspense kills me! |
 Aurelia Violet 11/16/00 . chapter 1That was awesome! AAH! Someone's trying to kill Gary! Write a part 2! |