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| wh0r3 2007-12-27 ch 15,  | abusethe most awsomest yu-gi-oh story i've evr read. it was the coolest! |
| Aiyobi Uzamaki 2007-07-01 ch 15, | abusei loved the ending and thought it was cute keep it up |
| Talye Kendrin 2007-05-12 ch 15, | abuseLol... very sappy ending. :D But I don't mind... much. I loved this story. You have great writing skills. My only critique would be that you should look out for spelling and grammar errors more. Other than that, it was great! |
| Talye Kendrin 2007-05-12 ch 7, | abuseArgh? D: Her father is evil?! No! ...Sorry, that was just a bit of a shocker. -eats popcorn and goes on to read the next chapter- |
| Talye Kendrin 2007-05-11 ch 1, | abuseO.O" ...Wow. I must read the rest now, but I thought I should review to tell you how awesome I think this is so far! I think it's amazing for the main character to be so close to her mom, but it's so tragic for her to lose her! I can't wait to see what happens now! Thank you for posting this up here. It is great so far! |
| cousinsteven 2004-07-26 ch 1, anon. | abusepersonaly i like the plot he dose scream another story of the same old boring stuff the names are original enough of course what am i saying yor origonal. thats my reveiw hope you like it. |
| Sakura Trees 2004-04-26 ch 1, | abuseSequel please |
| Dark Queen of Roses 2003-05-19 ch 15, | abusekewl! |
| Kirsta Nadaime 2003-05-17 ch 15, | abusewOw! I loved this story! you must write a sequel! ~kirsta~ |
| Boy Crazy Magician Chick 2003-05-16 ch 15, | abuseAH! I LOVED IT! *runs up, picks you up, and dances around the room hugging you* AH! Good ending! One of the best stories yet! Alright! *Bursts out with Joy* WOHO! GOD I LOVE THIS STORY! |
| Johanna Gen and her incredi... 2003-05-16 ch 15, anon. | abuseJ: I'm not dead! Mwahahahahaha! Sarah: *sigh* J, get to the point. J: Eh? Oh, right. I like the story, even though you killed most of us off. Sarah: Yeah, what she said. |
| Boy Crazy Magician Chick 2003-05-13 ch 14, | abuseYeah! GOD I LOVE THIS STORY! Anyway if this is the end, it was good, but if not...CONTINUE! This story is one of the best! :) |
| Cherry Romancer 2003-05-13 ch 14, anon. | abuseHurrah! Alex found her mother! That's so wonderful!! *giggles* Amunet and Yami were doing naughties!! *giggles* Bad spirits!! I'm so glad you finally updated!! Try to get the next chapter up quicker! |
| Heart 2003-04-04 ch 13, anon. | abuseOh poo! and just when it was getting good too! I absoulutly love this story...please please please KEEP WRITING! It should be published. |
| regulator girl 2003-03-30 ch 13, | abuseI think that this is my favorite chapter so far! I really like how you have them keep their love a secret! The puzzle smashing, pharoah becoming, dark magics, and all during a flashback/ dream thing, made this a really good chapter!! Please update soon! Emma |