cool story

Kim and Eric are married? I have got to read these in order. Great story, but what were the chances that Eric would get trapped with his estranged mother in a building collapse?

The Eric that you have written has... evolved? so much since you have started to write him. The stories that you have given him are good and believable, and written well.

Delicious story, this was. Bittersweet, but set in all the right ways. (Hn... I hope it doesn't sound like I'm hungry right now.) Fantastic work!

Really liked this, very suspenseful, and I liked the interaction between Eric and his mother.

The usual great job from you.

That was really good! I really liked it!

JAY! you didn't make me wait! (Thank you, thank you, thank you!)

Another great chapter, another grand canyon. Just loved Ellie and Alice. And Eric and Annie were priceless. Wonder how he's gonna explain that one... All in all, I'm basically going crazy.

But I can tell that this story is gonna be worth it. Nice one.

Great story. Very well written. Keep up the good work. _

*Keeps back the sequel bunnies* Back! Back!

This is so screaming for a sequel.

This was a great story...

Woo-hoo! Terrific stuff - what a Christmas present! Thank you! (Btw, my birthday's in June ... *hint, hint*)

AAAAAAAAARGHHHHHHHH! I can't believe you did that! That's not a clifhanger! It's the grand canyon! Aw man, this is so unfair. Very nice, suspense, can't wait for chapter two!

Taylor huh? And Ben 'knows' her? Ok, I can't wait. (So don't make me... please?)

Okay, can I just say that this was well worth the wait? And might I also add that I absolutely freakin' love the irony?

Whoa. Tense. Good. MORE!