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Eri
2009-09-09 . chapter 30
It would be nice if now, after 3 years of living in the oblivion... Kayka would finally get the divorce papers signed by god or someone (and withotu ChiChi's option to say no- I've always hated that horrible woman), in a way of eternal gratitude for freeing the universe of so many evil monsters and such... and keep doing it after all the things that have happened to her, him, whatever...
And we, the poor readers an ending in which we could get to understand how Kayka and Vegeta get to be under the same roof, in the same bed or something like that... o.o you get the idea, dont you?

Sorry for not saying first that I liked it, mainly because it wasnt all the gay crap a lot of people get in to this kind of fics, not discriminating feeling to the gays only it doesnt fics in my Goku's image after all my childhood watching Dragon Ball... Not the cool happy chap who gave the feeling to dont get the romatic thing even when he was an adult with two kids. And for getting Vegeta on his knees because he just lost any argument he could get to say 'no', and act like an idiot more than what it is needed... o.O Actually you got some balance there and thats nice ^w^ Only, the chaotic parents are the part I suppose nobody will ever get (not in our lifes, not in the fic) cus... going RANDY? o.o that was crepy

Lots of love, hope your college is going well... I know the feeling of not getting any sleep or a life.
Eri
Lucillia
2009-04-09 . chapter 30
Are you going to continue this? It's good, and I don't like that it was left at a cliffhanger. I want to find out what happened to Vegeta and Goku. I want to find out what happened to Bardock.
IM SO SCREWED
2008-09-12 . chapter 1
WOW...UN...THAT WAS SCREWED-UP IN A LOT OF WAYS...OH...CRAP I THREW UP ON MY BRAND NEW $80 SHIRT!IM SO ** DAED
timme
2008-08-13 . chapter 27
ryushifa...awesome. liked him before; love him now. it didn't even occur to me that he'd be the devil! very clever.
Ambiguous Inexplicable Enigma
2007-12-30 . chapter 30
Amazing
Miserati
2007-11-08 . chapter 30
For over a year I have been sitting at my computer waiting for the next chapter to arrive. Alas, no such thing has come. Being a dedicated reader of this story I was heartbroken every time I checked for new chapters, finding none. I hope that you return to your writing soon and finally end this story.

P.S: Please come back...
E>xoxoxo
adlex47Liger0
2007-06-12 . chapter 1
not bad not bad u still havent updated?
adlex47
2007-06-01 . chapter 1
hey ive been reading this story i think its great but its been a year more then i love it its entertaining even more so then the madness one. but common! more then a year? did u die on us? lol
vegamarie
2007-05-03 . chapter 13
I just found this story today and I am absolutely loving every second of it. It's so original and funny. And I had to review this chapter because the intelligence test that Bardock is taking comes straight from Monty Python (one of my favorite parts when they're trying to get across the bridge). Great story!
chibigoku4
2007-03-26 . chapter 30
i can't believe that i read all 30 chapters and it's STILL NOT FINISHED! O.O... oh well, i guess that's kind of a good thing.. i get to read more! ^_^
then again, that all depends on whether you update *glares accusingly*
well i guess i'll just say that this was fanastic to read and i hope you update soon!! ^-^

~chibigoku~
Yuko the Saiyan
2007-03-25 . chapter 30
ah! u haven't updated in forever wahh!!
oh well sigh... good story though...
fuu09
2007-02-05 . chapter 1
cant tell the next chapter
fuu09
2007-01-23 . chapter 30
Love It!
Will Goku come to here sense in?
I've Hope SO!!
Trapped in Reality
2006-11-23 . chapter 30
When are you going to update?
Kazuha-sama
2006-10-08 . chapter 30
Great story! I like it that much^^
And these great comments! I have such much fun with it!
Please write more^^ I want to read more^^
(sorry for my worse english)
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