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Reviews For: Through A Ghost's Eye

Queen of Blades
2003-04-06
ch 1,
abusepretty good, as far as angst goes. Though... well, nevermind. Not as angsty as it could be... well, actually, the topic isn't that angsty to begin with. but nice and descriptive.
Zed Stone
2003-02-16
ch 1,
abuseExcelent Story about the Ghost. As a soldier myself, I can appreciate the entire meaning. It was well written, and well thought out.
Lumenadducere
2003-01-23
ch 1,
abuseGreat job!

Other than a few mistakes involving the Confederacy and Mengsk, it was quite good. The Confederacy actually would stoop low enough to call nuclear strikes; if you read either the first or third SC books you'll see what I mean. And as for Mengsk, well, he's a living example of someone who considers the ends justifying the means... Kerrigan and his attacks of luring the Zerg upon the Confederacy are prime examples...

Anyway, like I said, it was really good other than those two things. I like stories about Ghosts :-). Keep up the great work!
Book-Master
2003-01-04
ch 1,
abuseHmmmmmmmmm, well, it was ok. But two things.

Ghosts are trained killers, they feel NOTHING! Certain types of drugs are injected at the begining of there training, and it makes them forget all past memorys, and eliminates all emotions.


The other thing, ummm, like I've seen 4 different things jsut like this. People must really like Ghosts....


Anyways, sorry for the lecture, I tlak to much.

En Taro Adun
Milk
2002-12-25
ch 1,
abuseWow, a Ghost with a conscience. =) Nice story. There was just some grammar and spelling mistakes but nothing serious. Keep up the good work and write more soon! =D
Tale Spinner
2002-12-25
ch 1,
abuseA grim but interesting story. I like the stories which take place during the main campaing(s) of SC from another point of view. Few typing errors aside, very enjoyable and clear text.
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