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thebondgirl
2006-02-11
ch 10,
abusehm, kind of a bitter-sweet ending, but an all around great story!:) keep it up!:):)
Mma63
2005-12-06
ch 10,
abuseIt was an amazing story, a great 2nd part for "New Messiah". I was so involved that I couldn't stop read from the first to last chapter(this one particullary brilliant).
Wow...
2005-07-03
ch 10, anon.
abuseDang...that was awesome. I wish i cud write like that. I definately think the sequel lived up 2 the original. That was...wow! lol. The ending kinda dissapointed me a little cuz i thought u were trying 2 tell us readers that there wudn't b a sequel when u wrote "they will not speak of this. ever." But i don't really think it needs nething more (although i wud love reading more:-)

Hope 2 read more of ur stories soon! 8o)
judy
2005-02-20
ch 10, anon.
abuseterrific more stories out there?
Thank you
Baa
2005-02-13
ch 10, anon.
abuseWell, i have no idea why you even think this story was not as good as the last! They are both amazing and carry so much insight into the characters that i am gobsmacked. Each word, each sentence, each chapter was asgood as the last. You built up emotions and tension, the heart pounded, waiting for your next word. There is no word to describe what you have written other than excellence. Really.
icanreadncount
2003-09-25
ch 10,
abuseI love your style of writing! It's very intriguing. I read New Messiah, but I don't remember if I reviewed it, so I loved that story, too.
jenn
2003-05-29
ch 5, anon.
abuseAhh!! Every time I try to get to chapter 6, it says site overload, come back later. Is it possible to send it to me?
deedle1
2003-05-07
ch 10,
abuseGreat story once again. Thanx for the FF.
deedle1
2003-05-07
ch 9,
abuseThis was great. It got me thinking on how I would love to stop the badness in the world, but do it in a different way. It also got me thinking that God does exist and that he heals everybody in different ways. This is one I will always remember. Thanks for the great story. On to chapter 10!
Cerasi J
2003-02-11
ch 10,
abuseA very nice way to wrap things up!!! I can't wait to read your other stuff, I hope you write some more N/S fics, those are few and far between! =)
Cerasi J
2003-02-11
ch 9,
abuseOh, this is really great!!! My favorite: He would be her hero. I love that!!! It's so sweet and... awwww!! Okay, I'm off to read the rest!!!!! =D
Cerasi J
2003-02-11
ch 8,
abuseOooh yeah! This is good! Love the NSR hints there!! WEEE!! And may I just say that I think your word useage is AMAZING! You can really paint pictures in the mind!! Keep up the good work! =)
Sprinkles143
2003-01-26
ch 10,
abusei don't care what you say about this story being inferior, i loved it! even though the action and people were somewhat different between this story and "new messiah," the depth and meaning of the stories were the same. i'm sorry you didn't enjoy writing it as much because i sure enjoyed reading it. i should bake you cookies or something to thank you for letting me read your awesome writings.

gosh, the last two chapters of this story were just wonderful, not just because of the "happy ending" and the subtle n/s romance but because of the words you use, the lessons you tell, the sort of morals of the story. it's all perfect. seriously.

after reading something you write, i always leave thinking. i mean deep thinking, about life and all. you put so much meaning in to these stories. i'm truly amazed.

this is the honest truth: you are a beautiful writer. yeah, csi is the best show ever and it's great that we get to enjoy their characters for our fiction, but the beautiful i'm talking about is in your words, in the non-csi-related words like the whole chapter 10, the stuff on life and coincidence and all that. i am so serious here, you really write beautifully and are truly talented.

all i have to say is "you go girl!!!!" thanks for sharing all your stuff with us. keep it up, don't ever stop!!! (for my sake, at least)

--meg :)
JennyK
2003-01-23
ch 10,
abuseWhat a story & thank you so much for giving the Nick/Sara relationship its dues, for they really are meant for each other, just it will never happen for we're bound to loose one or the other but you at least left us wondering and they need each other in the same way, thank god you put that in!

Alright sorry slightly of track, superb story and you so got the characters nailed & Nick! Plus I love any Nick/Sara so thank you! Keep writing!
Hope Calaris
2003-01-20
ch 10, anon.
abuseI really like your storys, you have a fascinating style to describe sth. Respect!
But I don’t like the end of “Black Plague” because of the feelings between Nick and Sara.
And now I have a question, can I translate “New Messiah” and “Black Plague” into German?
And excuse my bad English, I’m a german girl.
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