Agh! No! You can't do this to me! *runs in circles* Somehow...I have no sense of closure! Although I really, really liked it, and it was cute and ...yayness...but I still feel kind of cheated...and can I archive this one, too? -Windsong

^_^ I love it..!

This is very, very, very, *very* cool. I love it. *grins* Somehow you've got the exactly perfect mix of description & emotive dialogue that conveys Duo & Heero's personalities while giving details that ordinarily would only be included in a fangirl's third-person perspective. I like the 'butterfly spreading its wings across his cheeks' especially, along with Duo keeping his eyes open as if afraid Heero would bite him. Adds a sweet touch of humour to an already great romance fic. I love little short things like this -- fics of this type were *invented* for shounen-ai. Just luverly, from beginning to end.

Cheers,
--Shellaq

MAGGUMS! That was amazing! *weep* It was so amazing! And you want a flame to light the candles you were talking about? You're not getting one here. And I want one of my 6 Aces! *giggle* That was amazing... is there gonna be more?
~Koneko-chan~

cool, i love the heero/duo pairings!!! i dunno why.. i guess im just quirky that way.

Just love a little sappy fic for christmas, thanks!^-^

This is so adorable, Mag-ster ( oookay, you're gona beat me up for that later ). Really cute, and really good. Flows well. Me like!