i think it was a very sweet an tender fic and i can only think of one bad thing about it ... brad should have kissed him back, i supose he has his reasons . it really is a lovely fic so dont doubt it for a moment

mein shinigami, that was good! considering that I've never SEEN either the anime OR the manga [but i'm looking. and the anime's coming soon.] and that brad's my favorite char so far.

I'm not sure if that was really cute, or really sad. I feel bad for Schu, something that doesn't happen alot.

Ho-ho! That was very interesting. :) A very short, almost strange, fic, but still good.

Seph was here. :P

ok, dangnabit! u r gonna continue this thing! u just hafta! pretty pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase???

SQUEEEEEEEEE SO CUUUUUUUTE! i gotta finish my yoken for chrizmaz... BLAAAAAAAH!!!111

I had to love that "definitely *wasn't* a gun in Schuldig's pants" line. I think Schu ought to keep trying. Brad might be "the man who sees you coming," but his planning is "meticulous, but not infallible."

aaaaaawwwwwww!

XD Hehehe...I enjoyed that. Seems like exactly the sort of relationship Brad and Schu might have...

Very Cute! Hope you decide to make this a longer fic.