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| lattespeaker 2003-11-18 ch 10, anon. | abusehey great story so far! ;) you re a great writer! plz e mail me when you come out w/ the next ch. thnx alws |
| Melly1 2003-08-02 ch 9,  | abuseWhat! No! Nothing can happen to Paden..I love him!! He is so cute!! Haha. I can't wait for the next chapter! Update sooN! |
| piper 2003-08-02 ch 9, anon. | abusei think she's still out to get them and the bos anyways it's a really good story please write more soon |
| chestnut3 2003-05-08 ch 8, | abuseAm I the only one that still likes this story? I think its great, mainly because it has Cole. I loved the way you have portrayed him as such a loving and caring father. I would love to see more family moments with Phoebe, Cole, Paden, and Petrina. Are you going to update again anytime? |
| Jessica 2003-04-07 ch 8, anon. | abuseI absolutely love this story! When are going to update it? I hope that you haven't given up on it. I do think that since you had that wonderful chapter with Cole and Petrina that you could have one with COle and Paden, like a father/son bonding session. PLEASE write more soon. |
| Dreamen in love 2003-03-01 ch 1, | abuseHey wats up! It's a really cool chapter I can't to read the rest of it ci ya!11 Dreamen in Love |
| Jessica 2003-02-25 ch 8, anon. | abuseI absolutely loved this chapter. Cole was so sweet and I love Paden and Petrina. They are so cute! I can't wait for you to write more. |
| Maria Kairay 2003-01-27 ch 7, | abusecome on write more! oh, please write more! but portia seems...almost as sepcial as the Halliwells. Does she have to be evil?????????!!!! |
| jessica 2003-01-27 ch 7, anon. | abuseYeah! You updated! I love this story. I really like all of the children's names. So far, my favorite character is Paden. He's seems like a cute little troublemaker, exactly how I always pictured how Phoebe and Cole's children would be like. I would like to see more interaction between Cole, Phoebe, and their children. Cole would be such a sweet daddy. |
| piper 2003-01-26 ch 7, anon. | abusevery good i wounder if portia is really related to them?? very good please write more soon |
| piper5050 2003-01-26 ch 7, | abuseTHIS IS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!1 YOU NEED TO KEEP GOING!!!!!!!!!!1 |
| Katriona 2003-01-21 ch 6, | abuseGood fic. But why does Portia want to hurt them? Isn't it part of the Wiccan Rede to "harm none, do what ye will"? |
| Piper Halliwell 2003-01-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou can't stop there. this story is excellent. Keep writing you've got a talent. Will you finish the story soon so we can finish reading it? |
| piper 2002-12-30 ch 6, anon. | abusevery good chapter write more soon |
| Strife's LMNT 2002-12-29 ch 1, | abusea bit confusing with all the "P" names, but i guess it wouldn't work any other way, would it? |