i like it! lol

Not bad. I guess I'll read this.

I can see why Shadowgleam's pretty ** at Gavin for dumping her in the forest .

Hi Morbane,
Tremendous story--I loved every word of it.
I think the way you portray the thoughts and actions of an abandoned Pokemon are so well done. And the characterization of all the characters is realistic and fascinating. How do you do it!?
I like the way you sometimes describe so much in so few words. Nice touch about adding a scent to the clefairy doll too.
Don't worry about Mewtwo, he was portrayed both innovatively and believably.
Glad I came across this story, it made my day!
Raichu.

Cool! Is a sequel even remotely on your mind? Please?

A great end to a great fanfic. Maybe your next outing could be the continuing adventures of Shadowgleam and Strike, eh?

*giggles* I love Shadowgleam. She's such a confident little Raichu, with just reason. ;) And you gave us a happy ending. How considerate! I think it was a nice, simple ending to the story.
*pauses* Are you going to continue your Pokémon Gods story? I was really into that one.
But anyway, nice work, Morbane!

WOW! This is great. I don't have any suggestions, just keep going! I want to see the epilogue!

Excellent, Morbane! I love your writing. But, more importantly, I liked how you used my description of Mewtwo's island and castle. Hell, I think you did it better. I can't wait for the end.

What hole was I living in?! I forgot to read this story (It may be cause of the lovely changes that took place). Yup, lotta dialogue in here. And you did give her an answer, good for you! Epilogue? The story is almost over! Aw, man! Oh well, I await the epilogue. I can't wait to see how it ends. Keep it up. (Sorry to keep the review short, I have to go to class now. Bleah!)

~CT

Yes! And they all live happily ever after, (almost) the end. =P

Nah. Just kidding. Mewtwo was very well written, and I love the nicknames Gavin gives to his Pokémon. Simply put, this story rocked.

Although I'm still wondering why Mewtwo chose to grant Shadowgleam's request.

Oh well. An explanation? Or just adding to the mystery? :)

Sorry I took so long to read this. I finally got around to it! Yeah! Man, if there's one thing I love, it's when Pokemon 'talk'. Hence, I love that one episode where they all got stranded on that amusement park (I think that's what it was)and the Pokemon were talking:)Very cute. Although this was different...but in a good way!

I'm glad you've given Shadowgleam an opportunity to ask questions. Hopefully, she finds the answers soon. Okay, I'm rambling. Nice story. Keep it up.

~CT

*applauds* Beautimous!! :D I really love ur writing style. Marle wasn't kidding, hehe... Can't wait to hear the rest... Only thing was that it said "Mewtwo was a statue" [c. 12] and that's a little too similar to the lameness of the 1st pokemon movie.. I nearly got confused. Haha, but you are very very talented! Great work!

Hmm, Manchild, huh? Fitting, but... I dunno. "..."

I like the way you said it was Pokémon instinct to recognize a Legendary, and the way you described Mewtwo.

Well, anyway, I'm intrigued to find out what happens next, O Grammarfreak...

Mou...you had to end it there? I want more! ;_; He he...sorry about that. Now they're on the way to find Mewtwo and answers (at least I hope they do!) Keep it up.~CT