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Peacebunnie
2003-09-13 . chapter 3
I'm greatly impressed with your level of characterization, and you've done a fabulous job adapting the setting to present day. Two thumbs up, and keep up the good work. ^_^
infinite nemo
2003-01-13 . chapter 3
haha ^_^ yeah, i think a lot of people read when they shouldn't. uhm, well i read it this morning but i had to run to class... but i think this chapter was a bit more disjointed. perhaps i missed some things. *wince* i like telling myself i'm not squeamish about such things, but a girl younger than me dating someone who is 28... aiyah! ah well @ least it's not a fic. interesting how you threw in that tiny bit of kenshin's hentai thoughts... i'm still wondering how this togetherness thing will work. ah well- looking foward to the next update, especially since all the characters are still continuing on with how i had originally thought they would be. this is very interesting and i really like it. ^_^
lizzie
2003-01-13 . chapter 3
Good update...shame on Kenshin for making Kaoru feel ill after that wild car ride. It made me remember what my uncle once said to me while he was teaching me how to drive..."One can usually tell the personality of a person by the way he/she drives"-I take it Kenshin is still feeling a little reckless and seeks that adrenaline drive every now and then...hehehehe!!! I only noted a minor error, Kaoru is usually known as the Racoon girl while Misao was termed the Weasel girl. I hope you update soon!!!
Deja Know I Been Lookin For Vu
2003-01-13 . chapter 3
I can root for whoever I wanna root for!!!

This sudden darkness of Kenshin is kinda scaring me! Perhaps Kaoru is going to have some sort of effect on Kenshin? Yes, yes???

Hehehe, it's funny how Kenshin's like "NO!!! LITTLE GIRL!!!!" but at the same time kind of annoying because I want to scream at him, "DON'T BE THAT MEAN!!!" and I also want to scream at Kaoru's brother. "Ugly..." So very mean...

You had better have a healthy chunk of the next chapter ready NOW and had better be ready to post it SOON.

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!
sora
2003-01-13 . chapter 3
this story has really sparked my interest and I can't wait to see some more KK interaction. I have a question though........isn't Misao's animal supposed to be a weasel? Keep it up and update soon!
Kyaa Kyaff
2003-01-13 . chapter 3
Great story! wow! it's ver well-written and i love the characterization of Kenshin! please keep up the great work! it's awesome and i'll be waiting for more!
^o^
KittandChips
2003-01-13 . chapter 3
another great chapter. The plot thickens! lol I bet Kaoru scratched the car ;) ;)
Deja Know I Been Lookin For Vu
2003-01-04 . chapter 2
>>>>...quickly put on a grinning mask that was frightening enough to scare children away.

Teehee!!! Got a seriously funny (*grin*) mental image there.

Well, you have me hooked, JA, and I don't even know what all the characters look like! I'm loving this story, and itching to read more!

*itches back on chair* Come on now, update! Surely you have it prepared, and just don't want to give it to us yet? Well, DO!!!!! Remember, you owe me! *evil grin*

Hmph! See if I review next time! You doubt my loyalty? Well! I never!

Hehehehe....MORE!!!!!!!!!!!

Yeah, impatient are you? Well, what you get for impatience is a story of a review!!!

But wait!!! Wouldn't that be giving in to your demands? Or commands...Or...umm...WHATEVER!

I hope we'll be seeing more of Kenshin...and Kaoru...Yes, yes?!?!!? Please!?!?

I'm hooked now! I can't help it! I'm gonna have to go look for pictures of everyone later...Yes, I'll do that...Unless you want to find them for me? Yes....

PLEASE MORE NOW PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!
KittandChips
2003-01-01 . chapter 2
I haven't seen Kenshin, but I still love reading this fic. Can't wait to see where it goes, and I'm looking forward to the promised romance. I guess there's been the hint of it already ;)
lizzie
2003-01-01 . chapter 2
Hmmmm the plot continues to thicken. The other characters of RK have made an apperance. You now have me wondering what type of business both families run; the age difference between K&K; and what Kenshin is really doing in Tokyo. I really hope you update soon, this story gets more interesting after each chapter!!!!
lizzie
2003-01-01 . chapter 1
Jet-lag could be a pain especially since I would rather be back home in Nagano, but stories like this make returning back to Seattle worth it. I knew I should have brought my laptop...hehehehe!!! So far so good, the writing style and mystery involved in the plot keeps one interested. Now I am off to read the next chapter.....
infinite nemo
2002-12-31 . chapter 2
you definitely should have gotten more reviews for this fic, and i have no right to be up @ 2:30 am. i hate myself, but not this fic ^_~ interesting to see. kenshin is a mad jerk. i guess i wasn't thinking too much, he is battousai. (can't think of much about battousai right now) da~ng it was weird to see aoshi being dragged around. so, the characters are making an appearance. it took 10 yrs for kenshin to take action neh? it'll be interesting to see romance develop, especially if it's k/k, well, yeah since you keep stressing how he sees her as a little girl. =) keep it up. happy new year ^_^
Astarael
2002-12-31 . chapter 1
Keep up the good work! I'm very excited to find out what happens next!
Neko-chan
2002-12-31 . chapter 2
o_O *is in total awe* Uh... wow. Wonderful, wonderful fic.! ^_^ I love the way you write and bring out the characters spirits! I hope you keep up the fantastic work! =^_^=
Val
2002-12-31 . chapter 2
Another good chapter. I like your writing style. I take it Kaoru's father is involved in the same line of work("business") as Hiko? He seems like a cold man. Looking forward to the next one! Please update soon.
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