I love this story! Oww! I'm crying! Waah!

I like this story,
the ending is especially emotional. Kojirioh would not let go of that sword, and Mukoro's grave is cursed that no plants will grow near.
Beautiful.

Good characterization. Good wording. Good descriptions, escpecially at the fight scenes. Good plot. My only gripe is the tiny bit of otaku japanese used in the fic( I know I've used that in my older fics). I can understand the artisitic purposes for putting it, but it detracts a bit(in my opinion) from an otherwise well written fic.

This is loads better than my Last Blade, Gary Stu fic(which I haven't typed yet)