Whoa I like this one.

I happened to like your original version of this story. Though this new version is excellent as well. Is there anyway you post the original to?
If not would it be possible for you to send me a copy? Thank you for your time.

Nice job

I really like the rewrite of this stoey, and I favor this new style, as it's sort of dark and moody. either way i want to thank you for writing and ask you to carry on.

Hah! Good work.
I'll be wanting to see more of this. I like it, just like i liked the Wadering Saotome, but this have a new interesting twist..

Keep up the good work!

Strongly reminicent of the Breaking Chains Series (Fey Ranma)

great story

I like it. I like it a lot.

By all means please continue your rewrite. I enjoyed reading the first version, as far as you got.

I have also enjoyed your rewrite. Strong stuff, well written. The intermingling of Ranma and what remains of Typhons memories is interesting.

I am curious to see where you are going to take this tale.

This has the makings of a very fine tale.

Good stuff!

Looking forward to chapter 3.

I like plese riet more.

Hi gerat Story so far cain't wait for more keep up the good work.

I've read Chains and this defenitly diverges from it the wife killing her husband and it's quite interesting hope to see more soon also hope to see the latest addition to the 1/2 moon series.

intresting spin on the story i want to see more

Hmm I do not know what to think of this just yet I quess it will depend on the next chapter

Look good so far. Grum appear to conclude the chain series already. This will make a good AU. Too bad you decide to abandon the old one though.