the story is really good, i've also seen your pics on DA and their really good

Nice fic, I really hope that you'll post a Rhia/Brooklyn fic soon, I've seen alot of your devinations of them and would really like to read a fic you wrote about them.

Thatnks for using my charecter. I hope I make a slight apperence agian. The story is good you should just write faster. Also for any story that you need an OC on mine is avalible. Now read my story biach.

Ohh great fic!
love it!
Athena Caruso is my favourite^^
but everyone is good

Hey,
Awesome fiction so far. Its sweet that there is finally a kick ** chic team. :P Keep up the good work. I was wondering if you ever wanted like another member on the fiction like for a character becuz most teams have 4 players and if u cant think of a new chic then ya drop me a line about it... Butbya still drop me a line neways hopefully my fiction is uploaded sometime you'll have to check it out once im finally done rechanging the first chapter... But ya i love your fic hope you update soon!
WaterBlader
Jessica..aka...Alazania

OMG!! *jumps up and down* That was so awsome!! You write beyblading scenes soo well! Plus they have lots of description so it isn't boring like when I try to write beyblading scenes. lol. Every chapter has been really good so far and the grammer has been really great too. A few spelling mistakes here and there but that's to be expected. I like Rhia so much XD She's so awsome! Before I leave I just want to ask if your going to add any romance to this story? Like any pairings or anything. *cough cough* Rhia/Tala *cough* Or maybe Rhia/Brooklyn? (I've checked out your deviantART stuff, it's awsome by the way ^__^) Well I hope you can get around to writing another chapter some time soon. Later days,
Smiley Joe

wow, cool ^^ continue soon please
Kailie Roshi: uh oh i hope i don't loose, I CAN'T FOR THE SAKE OF MY TEAM, but then again the other team being the main team sorta gives me a disatvantage, OH WELL, I WILL TRY MY BEST AND WIN A ROUND FOR MY TEAM!
hehe, she gets excited like that ^^ well goodluck to you and continue soon, u r a good writer
JingleBElls

*does the "yay a fic got updated" dance* Nice work there, me likes alot. Your action sequences are pretty good, just make sure you don't bog down on details too too much. Ciao, hun.

Yeah, Toni is a lot like Tani. Lol, sorry about that. Toni Hikaru sounds v. cool anyway. Wow! The battle between Rhia and Toni... sorry, Toni Hikaru, was brilliant! V. intense! Tee? Bwahahaha! Funny! Continue soon!

Yay my charas match is coming up um... are the Bladebreakers included just a ques. Hey if Cele wins then nethier team wins. I can't wait to see how this develops and can Cele do kindof what Rhia does b/c she is creepy. Peace cont.

Very nice. Kinda funny a week after I first saw it you seemed to continue it. >>
Well, good story. And cant wait for next few chapters. ^^

Yay, you used my character! Thank you! ^^ Are you gonna do pairings?

This is really good.You included me. You included me :Jumps up and down: ignore her she is an idiot. Hey f**k you b**ch. Bite me. Don't make me. I'll get rabies. She is so mean any way are the beybreakers being included and if they are I claim acting like Ty's Sister. Are you obseesed. No I think he is hiding something and it is f**king huge like he killed his mom or something. Read meh fic if ye confused. Stop bugging her so she can contine. Bite me. This is Hell injoy your stay. F**k You. :Two fiqures disapper into shadow:

Gaze: It's mostly a one-time thing ^_^; Though I might end up bringing them in for a bit sometime later on. I dunno. This fic mostly has no planning to it XD;

0_o Katrina won??
Katrina: I did 0_o
GS & Katrina: YAY ^_^
GS: So that team didnt win, it was still a cool battle. Will the Iron Reapers be in more chapters, or was it a one time thing?
either way, ill be reading it
^_^