This story is so sweet! I love the Orphan/ Majic pairing! This story is great! Would you write more stories like this one? I adore stories like this and I hope to read more!

Very, absolutely, fun fic to read. Anyways, the fic was really good. Um... is there anything left to say? Everyone's said it. Never mind! :P

This is an absolutely fantastic story... I couldn't take my eyes away for a second. It is so very in character, and I found myself nodding and agreeing with so many things in it! You truly have a talent that should never be wasted - please make sure you do everything to reach your full potential! :)

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good job, good job. well-woven, and good. ^^

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aww how gorgeous. I love your fics, they are brilliant!! I just can't describe how much I love them!!

Ooooo... *_* That was *wonderful*! Seriously, not only was it well written in excellent form, but it was really good. And a great ending! Awwwwww... coolness.

^__^ I can't resist. *sings, dances in glee* Go Majic, go Majic, uh-huh, YEAH!

... okay, done now. Hee, *great* writing.

*claps* Wooow, that was really really good! ^_^ Another awesome Majic/orphen!! Yay Yay!!
Can't wait to read more of your work!!!
Take care, Ja ne

That was beautiful. I haven't read much of SSO, but I really did enjoy this work. You did an excellent job. Congratulations!

*gapes*

My GOD. This... This was EXCELLENT! My GOD! You don't know how HAPPY this makes me! For one, we have a third author in the Orphen/Majic fandom here at ff.net, and another, she can WRITE WELL!

You can spell, your grammer is excellent and your characterization is AMAZING beyond belief. I'm in complete and total awe. I LOVE this fic, and it's definitely going to be a favorite of mine for a while!

Keep it up! This was EXCELLENT! Your Majic was so SWEET and IN CHARACTER and SMART, and... In character! I love him and I love your writing! I'd love to see more from you in the future!