|Reviews for Time out of Place|
| kasia110 4/26/13 . chapter 24
Funny, great plot, drama, and the progression is just great. Best fic I've read in awhile!
| Shade Dreams 4/7/13 . chapter 23
Thank you ! Thank You!
Your history is SO Beautifull !
| Carling 3/15/13 . chapter 23
Another beautiful Draco/Harry story. I just discovered your work yesterday, The Depths of Winter being the first story of yours I read. Your depiction of the war with Voldemort is very gripping and dramatic and scary and more realistic in many ways than the original series could be, given that it was written for a younger audience. Your Voldemort and Death Eaters are truly evil and frightening and match real world evil. I loved the powerful role you gave to Muggles in the fight. It's so much better than depicting Muggles as helpless victims fit only for humiliation and slaughter. You do a great job weaving the Muggles and Wizards together.
The romantic parts of the story were simply beautiful.
| PurpleWings71 2/18/13 . chapter 23
OMG lovely story so very lovely!
| magickerbie 1/25/13 . chapter 23
What a wonderful story. Captivating and engaging, with just the right amount of humor. You are and amazing writer and I full heatedly think you need to take up a career in writing. This is by far one of the best Fanfictions I have yet to read, and the only one I have actually shed a few tears on.
I congratulate your elaborate story line and creative twists that make your writing so unique. The depths of winter is my favorite Fanfictions ever, and this one rivals on third best ;)
Thank you for writing, continue the great work!
| liondragon521 1/19/13 . chapter 23
I totally love your whole story! I loved Chapter 22, it would have been a perfect ending to leave all the readers to think about all the possibilities of different endings. I like the ending on Chapter 23 but I felt it was too fast to the end. However you did amazing on the whole story!
| Crimson's Raining 1/12/13 . chapter 23
Second time I've read this story and I STILL end up crying by the last chapters...it's phenomenal. Still love it and wouldn't mind knowing some of the middle chapters of that 7 year gap. Love it
Have a lovely day
| KathrenCullen18 1/7/13 . chapter 23
an amazing story!
| ThatPerson 12/25/12 . chapter 23
You. Yes. You. I love you for writing this.
| darkendLuminescence 11/24/12 . chapter 2
Thatssss a very nice time travel accident you have there...
| DrarryJohnlock18 10/24/12 . chapter 23
That was beautiful. - Draco
| sumthin.clever.5 10/5/12 . chapter 1
Odd. I hope you go into detail with what happened to them. And they're slightly OOC, but that's manageable.
| SonOfSnape 10/2/12 . chapter 24
A most beautiful tale.
| EmLights 9/15/12 . chapter 23
what an amazing story! I loved it!
| Caprican 8/29/12 . chapter 24
Fantastic tale overall! I was very please with how you ha the relatioship progress. Too often people press Harry and Draco into lovey dovey situations with an unnatural swiftness. You, however, managed to write them in a way that felt natural and fluid.
That being said, I do have a few small criticisms that I am not sure will be relevent to you anymore. I see that a lot of time has passed since you wrote this and I haven't read any of your newer fictions, so you may have already grown out if these habits. First off, though you have brilliant ideas and your characterization is awesome, you tend to get into the habit of telling the reader what is happening as opposed to showing them what is happening. For example: saying, "The night was foggy." as opposed to saying, "Harry could barely see through the dense opressive fog of the night." One tells you the night is foggy, while the other shows you how the foggy night affects the character. Not a big change in structure, but it makes the story a bit more personal and interesting to read.
Also, I agree with some of you reviewers that your extensive use it the term "The Boy Who Lived" is a bit overdone. I know that a lot of teachers tote the evils of pronouns, but if used correctly they breakup the choppiness of using a name over and over again.
Last criticism has to do with the use of guns. Now I am a Yankee, so I could be totally off base here, but aren't guns illegal in the UK? I know it was essential to parts of the story, but just wondering...
Again, this a fabulous story and I read most of it in one sitting. I would definitely love to see more HP fan fiction from you in the future if you can ever tear yourself away from NCIS and House! Keep writing, because you definately have the talent!