I love it! YAY!

Wow, I'm really into Zell yaio these days...I've been reading so many of these genres.

"Because I know this is the closest I will ever get to you, the closest I will let myself get to you.
Upon leaving the clearing I mutter an 'esuna' and it drifts over to you,
breaking your spell.
And so you leave your sphere and come back to take part in this world again,
and for you, it is as if just nothing has happened at all. "

That was excellent! I loved this little ficlet!

Wow. Nice. I love the ending... those last few sentences are heart-wrenching. I think you write a really good Seifer, believable, even in this more tender moment. On the first read-through, "graphitic" seemed more than a little unusual for a choice of scent adjectives until Zell's condition finally sunk in... then I went back and realized all the subtle places where you hint at what's going on, and discovered that it's all set up from the very beginning of the fic. Awesome. :)

Look this is absolutely great. I like the style you have written it in, very different, very effective in what you were trying to put across. You should write more because I would be interested in seeing what else you have up your sleeve. I do like this pairing as well and to have Seifer touching his obsession in a magic way was magical. Keep up the good writing.

shaeric

That was so kawaii. ^_^ Oh poor Seifer, ...need Spells to get Zell. And even if it´s just for a moment.
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Keep going.