Reviews for Ties That Bind

Mike Steele
2002-12-26
ch 1, anon.

abuseThis story is very well-written. Yes, there are several punctuation mistakes, but aside from those the grammar is excellent, which is integral to the marvelousness of any story. The character development is very solid, realistic, and enjoyable, and the plot is quite intriguing; it diverges from the typical innanities and doldrums of similar fanfics.
And that is just for the first chapter.
I'm interested in finding out what next occurs in this story. The established suspense is refreshing.

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