um, ok, a litle too dirty

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really sweet, good job showing the relationship that danny and sydney had.

I hate that most of the greatest stories on here only get a review or two...You did great!

I thought this was great. smut is hard to do well, and you really did a great job. especially hard to writing smut to be sweet and realistic, especially when it;s someone's first time. You did a great job.