That was sad. :'( Very touching.

This was pretty well written for your first Ten/Ryo. Hope to see more of your writing in the future and keep writing!

Please don't kill me! My former internet access did not allow me

to review fics! So I'm finally reviewing this great story. Well...

I really love this fic. Tenchi and Ryoko belong together, and I

think that if Tenchi was dying, this might be what would happen. It

was very well written, even though the girls were a little out of

character. I like this a lot, though, keep writing Tenchi fics!

Interesting...Great emotion portrayed in your writing...

oh cool. Very very cool. I liked it

Cute Story... I just love Ryoko and Tenchi fics!

Hey I know this story might be a little old (hehehehe) but i just wanted to say GREAT STORY!

Huh. I look for chapter 2 of that Sakuya fic and find this instead. Now I'm happy. I'll just pretend I never read the Sakuya fic and live in my happy, peaceful world with little dancing Tenchi & Ryokos. .

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Why didn't you read this one to me grrrrr.

This is a very good story. Even if Ryoko was... aw sh*t I can't say anything about OOC. Since she was kinda OOC it made it even sweeter. Very good. I like the last thing Ryoko says at the end it's very sad and poetic. I love this story. I say it's a must read.

Love the story

It was sooooo sad that Tenchi died and that he finally kisses Ryoko!

It was very good. I'm just sad that Tenchi had to die right after he told her he loved her. She was right they could have had a lot.

eeeee have ya wrote the sequal yet?