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   xxkpxx 6/30/10 . chapter 4awwww i love her with Jim... please update soon |
| TakeItAsItComes 1/14/07 . chapter 1 aw. i think this chapter is sweet. :) onto the next! |
| Starfire Gracen 7/6/06 . chapter 3 please continue! very good storyline. continue and update soon! |
| CarebearKara 10/18/04 . chapter 3 This is really good. |
| Angel 7/5/04 . chapter 3 okay you want honesty right? well truthfully, there is no plot to this story yet... its ALL just puff... To improve it you need to put in the major confict or at least a conflict in the next chapter.. normally the reason for writing a story is discovered or at least hinted at in the first chapters. I don't think you succussfully done any of that. I don't mean to sound rude but its the nicest way i could say it. All that this story is holding onto is her pregnancy... which is kinda dull... maybe give it more substance or something |
| Brin Summers 11/23/03 . chapter 3 Great story! |
| Boo 7/9/03 . chapter 3 Hey, I really like this! When Maureen talks, it sounds just like her in the movie. It is a really nice story, it shows her vulnerabilty should put some more stuff other then just about her pregnancy in, though it is really good stuff. thanks for writting this! |
| dance chick 6/6/03 . chapter 3 okay ch. 2&3 rock where is 4? i can't wait to read it you really have gift for this. |
| dance chick 6/6/03 . chapter 1 omg this is so good i love the first chapter and can't wait to read the second! |
| Donna 3/13/03 . chapter 3 I love it! Ok, so I'm 's the next installment? Anytime soon? |
| redmustang 3/4/03 . chapter 3 You are doing a great job, I can totally see Maureen acting this way after the movie. :-) Keep up the good work! Dee P.S. When people talk you need to use quotations " " but when they are thinking that is when the single mark comes in ' .just an english teacher at . |
| antonia 1/22/03 . chapter 3 super! i love it. |
| Katrin the Great 1/19/03 . chapter 3 I like your story! Keep writing! |
| Anonymous 1/19/03 . chapter 2 I always liked Maureen and Jim and wanted them to do more with them. Very good story! Keep it coming! |
| Katrin the Great 1/3/03 . chapter 2 Very, very good. I love your writing; there are lots of great descriptions there. By the way (I ask this only because I am American and am not familiar with the metric system)- when you say "6st" mean? I understand it's a weight, but I'm not familiar with the metric system. Any way, I love how someone took up the Maureen fanfics again! All of them seem to be about Jody and Charlie (mine included, not that there's anything wrong with that). Keep writing! |
