Wow. Please make a sequel. I'll be one of the first to read it if you did.

WOW! Just wow, fab story- I've really enjoyed reading it!

Stunning!

OMG!! I've been on the edge of my seat- this is getting so gripping!

Oh my! What a cliff hanger! I've been biting my nails this whole chapter!! Really well written!

Oh, god, I thought Bryce was dead! Quick thinking on Lara's part, there!! Love this story!

Wow!! Wonder what they've got themselves into this time? I'm sure it'll all work out in the end!

Whoot! Love the ending of this chapter!!

Omg!! Factistic!!

Ooh, things are starting to get really interesting!!

Lol!! Funny chapter!

Cool chapter! Can't wait to find out who Willem Parse is!

Love this chapter so much! Bryce is fab, and the interaction between Lara and Alex is lovely!

Great chapter!

YAY! Fab chapter!