Oh, poor Scott. Great job. Keep it up. Catch ya on the flip side.

i hope u didnt stop writing this story.
it is great an you shouldnt stop.
please continue
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

u eva gonna post again? its a great story u should make them hoock up

hehe this story is interesting, a lot different from what i thought though... the problems seem a lot smaller, and where are the parents? after all shelby is living in scotts house... lol it needs a little more conflict to keep it intersting and the chapters should be a little longer! but its a good idea :)

hey girl good chapter put more up soon ok see ya!

Deborah's right you know. And while no one has the power to send someone to hell, everyone can say who's going and who's not, even though we should only speak for ourselves because no one can know every single person who's saved (a Christian) and who's not.

Anywho, about your story, could you add question marks at the ends of your questions? That's really the only thing I found that bothered me about your story; the rest was terrific! Please try to put up more before the end of the month ok? Thanx! :)

Hey girl I so loveing this story of your your an extremely good writer and I can't wait for more so up date soon ok see ya!

please update soon..i wanna see what happens!

Hey! Sorry I didn't review this before. I thought I did...Anywho, this chap was GREAT. Keep up the good work! :)

good hun, but shelby is WAY too much out of character. lolz and whats up with scott with dreads?

OMG i luv this story it's really original! I hope u post soon (hint hint) lol j/ great writer and i can't wait for the next chapter

I love this, the whole concept is excellent. I can't wait for more!

please continue this story soon. I really want to see what happens next!

I love ur fic. It's really good. I can't wait to read more.

I looooove it; it's AWESOME! Please update soon-it's so well-written and just adorable!