So I'm in class, dead bored and I decided to read ur fic ... not sure how u feel about Yaoi, so I'm not leaving a signed review at the moment since most of my stuff ... are based on that medium ...

anyway, on2 ur fic ...

My first suggestion is that u get a beta-reader yo check ur work b4 posting. U tend to mix up ur tenses that it gets confusing sometimes.

Not going to leave any strong critics 4 now since i've only read 1 chappie ... off 2 read ur other chappies ...

^_^

wow, this chapter was LONG but it still rocks. ROCK ON!

great first chapter, seems really cool. ROCK ON!

Cool story, thanks for telling me about it. Keep writing.

great chapter, I hope to read more,

And it's Corp. not corpse

Hi again from me, hey great story

.......that guy should die! you un laugh at people who died, just because they explose when they do it!.....actually, yes, yes you do laugh at them. n/m, just something that i would find funny in my twisted mind. very good! i liked this chapter more than the first one! your writing keeps on getting better and better! anyway, keep up the great work!

lovies!!

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Becky
aka
Lyra342

Thanks for the e-mail! Really cool chappie!

hello! what is up! i loved it! i loooovvvveee Duo, and i can imagine him just as he acted and sounded in this fic. hehe...i plan on marrying him some day. j/k, but he is mine for all of you anime and manga lovers whom planning on marrying anyone of them! lol. nevermind. whatever. buhbye. IM me!

Lovies!

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Becky

Sorry that was me! I love this story! ^_^! Duo and Wufei always at it! But who are thes emonsters? DISNEYLAND! YAYA!LOL

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