I, the guardian of all that is Misato/Shinji to continue and make sure that they live happily ever after.

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P.S.

I challenge you, W*ING Higley to write a Misato/Shinji fic about them raising their child with humourous results.

A very interesting story please continue.

This is very interesting, you MUST continue.

By the way who is this Maya, is it Maya Ibuki or another Maya? I ask because most of what you describe is out of character for her. I've heard of a girl called Mana but I know nothing of her is this who you mean?

Anyway looking forward to when you continue! _

This show some promise, but I'm going to wait for a few more chapters to come out before I give a more solid judgement. The only problem I can see is that this looks like one big paragraph. There should be a blank line after someone says something.

This Maya person, is she the Maya from the series or is she someone else?

It's...entertaining, and the Eva characters are in-character, which is essential for an AU story.

Good job so far, but keep an eye on the formatting, and make sure the dialogue stays appropriate for the genre.

Not bad. Infact I like this a lot. It has the chemistery to be very itneristing. The only problem is I can't see Maya and Shinji getting to geather. I would recomend Asuka or even Mana kicking Shinji out of house and home. I like how you make the stroy slightly grity and dark but only slightly so. And Ranma is a good guy, don't make him be the designated victom here.

Anyways, keep up the good work!

- Ian Blackney

Hmmmm now this is interesting.

I want to see more of this.

Hopefully we should see what happened to the rest of the cast.