wow. this is absolutely adorable.
-tac

Hey, i really liked the way this story was going i hope you write more for it ^^

This was a pretty good one

wow...That was GOOD.

This was written very beautifully. Your writing is very smooth, and it's simpleness really brings out the atmosphere and scene of the fic. Your words are easily absorbed, and as I read I could really picture everything with perfect clarity, complete with background and sharp colors.

And the actions serving the transition between the humorous beginning and the more sentimental conclusion were wonderfully in-character and really helped string along your fic.

There's much more I'd like to say, but it'd turn into a rant! Overall, fantastic job!

Plus, I'd like to draw fanart for this, if you don't mind...

Short and sweet, very nicely done. You portrayed their relationship perfectly. :)

very nice, clearly written through the eyes of Naruto. The characters personalities are matched perfectly! The only flaw, I think, was Sasuke's calling Naruto a hero. He's got quite a bit of a inferiority complex, see. ^_~
Great job overall, I'll be keeping an eye on it.

hehe aw ^^;; it was cute.

WOW!! this was good!! goshers it was really and I do mean REALLY good!!

What a wonderful piece of Naruto fanfiction. And well researched too I see. I never noticed before that none of the Konoha houses had porches, but now that you mention it...
But the true highlight of this fic is the Sasuke/Naruto interaction. Your characterization of those two is flawless. I could actually SEE Sasuke and Naruto acting like that. You moulded their relationship perfectly, they might bicker but they still hold great respect for each other. Friendly banter... I love it.

This is actually the first well-written, in-character Naruto fic I found since I started looking for Naruto fanfiction. So I would like to thank you for writing it and making my day... well, night. I can go to sleep happy now. ^_~

I'm looking forward to reading more of your great work. ^_^

So short, so short and simple, and yet it's one of my favorite Naruto stories beating far longer stories. You ended it just right. At the point where they don't draw away from their personalities and yet at a point where we feel as if there's something intense between them. really enjoyed the story. I keep re-reading it over and over. I just can't get tired of it. It has the two perfect touches that draw me to Naruto and Sasuke stories: a touch of humoroues bickering, but not too much, and a touch of underlaying concern and a feel of empathy. Really liked the story. Thanks for writing it^-^

Aww. That was so...sweet...in a way. Kind of an intimate moment between Sasuke and Naruto. Me liked. And this didn't hurt either--"Oi Sakura! I'm going to tell Ino you have a mustache and that you need to shave every two days!" I laughed my ** off as well. That's always nice, too. Great job.

this is great

I would just like you to know that I searched every single page of Naruto fics for this one. I read it once and my friend and I are still cracking jokes about the way you phrased some of these things. Pure humor... Wonderful :)

I'm going to go stalk your website and see if you have anything else good up there!

Oi! *claps* GAMBATTE! MYUU! I loved this continue! Make it into a yaoi! I love yaoi... but this is a good shonen-ai... but what ever happened to kissing? Ne? I think you need kissing. Yup.

purty... =D nice!