Interesting and very original premise. I like how you've explained the Baron's backstory. Liz is very courageous - I would've taken my chances with the obliviate spell.

I think this was a really good story!

great story. i liked how you made up the baron's past. i found it very apropreate. i hope you keep writing.

-a big fan

I think you write excellent English _

Not that I would know much about that... English isn't my native language either.

Original idea, having a muggle-girl forced into Hogwarts by a raging bull. (heh :)

Sehr gut! (How do you like my deutsch? *grins sheepishly*)

That stiry was really cool but I would like you to finish the story if you don't mind

It's worth reading.

Write some more

I like it! an intriguing start. And I've always wanted to know more about the Bloody Baron! I look forward to more!