Wow. This story was seriously amazing. I admit I'm a big sucker for happy endings, but you wrote Dilandau's personality so well, and his true personality really ismn't all that conduciv e to happy endings.
I was really impressed by the authors note, that you had put so much research and thought into this. Also the writing was very good; lots of detail and imagery. Really good work.

this baby, was quite interesting. I'm going to have to agree and say that Dilandau is THE most complex and interesting character to try and write. the entire psychotic complex, was just deliciously added into him on top of the gender bending. i completely hated those gaps of no Dilandau like you mentioned, but the one that ate at me the most, was that after the doctors came to "fix" him after the death of the Dragonslayers, then we get a glimpse of Selena trying to eat a live snail, and then...nothing. he's gone for, like, five episodes, and then you finally see him waking up with no memory and talking to Jujuka. i'm like, what happened during that huge gap!! and also, i wish there was more explanation of his gender bending thing, but, nothing is perfect.

sorry...i went off there O_O; sorry. lol

anyway, i like this quite a bit, and now i'll be pondering dear little Dilandau a LOT more.

That was powerful.

Moreso than anything I've read.

Kudos.

~A~

I thought you made Dilandau fantastically realistic, with his flaws. His fear, his anger and his disgust were easily believable, and I felt very sorry for poor Miguel!

Mm. Sweet. Or not, actually. Considering Dilandau and Miguel's sex scene made me think more like a rape (Dil didn't really enjoy it, did he?) but amazingly written in any case. Very in-depth descriptions of the characters, and yes you're right; no matter how lovely and sweet and just aww it would be for Dilandau and Miguel to get together, I don't think Dil would really go for it.

I didn't realize it was you who wrote "Am I Not Merciful". That was rather nice, too, yes? Very violent.

I think you've captured Dilandau quite well. His fear of losing control is written nicely, and I like all the detail you put into this fic. Please write more soon!

~firedraygon97

That was crazy-awesome! The characters were really well developed. It was truly a creative piece and very descriptive. Just amazing, and quite original too.

I enjoyed it.

Yours truly,
Sweet roses

I'd just like to say I highly enjoyed this story, and bravo on portraying Dilandau as psychoticly beautifull as he is. The idea of someone of his rank forcing himself to endure what is clearly rape in order to restore order to his squad is nothing short of brilliant. Never have I seen such sheer Coolness in a fanfiction. Kudos, baby!

This has to be the best yaoi i've ever read...

I must say that the whole thing spanned 42 pages of a microsoft word document... but i read it anyway!!

Please... write a sequel!

I love you !! *gives cookies and a mixing bowel to lick*

GOD DAMN IT YOU HAVE TO WRITE A SEQUEL!! MY DILLY MUSE IS CRYING BECAUSE OF THE GREATNESS!

Dilly muse: Ya... tis very good!!

okay! where the f*ck is the next chapter?? its been forever! god! u r so slow! get your lazy ** up and write the next god damn chapter (please)

i want to know what happens to miguel and shesta

Well this was a very well written fanfic. I enjoyed it very very much. And i'm proud of you- last night while i was looking at all these fanfics that sucked, i read these really good previews and when i started to read them- they were absolute **. None of the characters WERE in character, and the writing was all terribly bad. As where this one was well written. I'm glad you kept dilandu in character. When people write fanfics, it's hard for them to keep the characters in character. which is why i'd hard for me to review fics. but this turned out wonderful! so heres a pat on the back from me. ^_^ good job!

yes, this was a great story. The way you wrote Dilandau was spectacular, actually. And really, I found the story funny, cause it's so far from what I would have done to achieve my goal of getting Miguel off my back. Send him a valentines day card and stuff and tell him we should just be friends, but then again if Dilandau just did that, what would make the story? I enjoyed reading it. The vocabulary words expanded my knowledge, and you wrote in such great detail. I hope you write other stories. It was a great read.

*blank stare*

Oh my God . . .

*blinks a couple of times to re-hydrate eyes*

It was like one giant poem . . . This was absolutely incredible . . .! How did you write this? I'm not shocked that the fourth chapter took you so long! The characterization was just stunning . . . And the emotional level of the story - you really felt like you were right there with Miguel. The two POV's were great, too - how half the time you wanted Miguel to be happy, and the other half you just felt miserable for Dilandau. This is such a powerful piece . . . A truly excellent job!

Tenika Dargan (stunned and silent)

I read this fic on your site and absoultey (i cant spell ~.^) LOVED it... keep writing