i can't believe this! I finally found it! This was the first fanfiction i had ever read, like maybe eight years ago. to this day i still remember it. it will always hold a special place in my heart

Very nicely written. I like how Raditz and Goku reconnected at the end. I kind of wish Toriyama had done something like this with Radtiz in DBZ.

Very good!

that was so nice! and so well thought! and so unexpected! and Zarbon is still alive and he killed Dodoria? yeah, that was definitely great!

good to see that Goku finaly accpeted his big brother. It feels so intimate to say it somehow because I have a hard time imagining a brotherly relation between the two XD

awesome explanations and plot too!

but are they really going to go back to hell so soon?

yet again, good stuff.

Just curious: why choose such weak villains? Just curious.

Aw... that was cute! Goku forgave Raditz... I see now why the story is called "Why?". Very good. I have to admit the beginning and the fight was kind of choppy but it seems you just wanted that as a reason to bring Nappa and Raditz back. Therefore the beginning served its purpose. That is the last story that i've read out of order and i shall continue the stories in the proper order this time. I will also earn my right to read it and review more often this time too.

I hope you continue to write really great stories like this,

Lone Warrior2

AW! That si so cool!

that was really good! one shots are kinda disappointing because some ppl dont end them right but you did a very good job. i dont remember any swearing either

Ah. Truly inspirational to see how various characters had changed… and certain characters could explain things done in life. Sort of a vindication for both Vegeta and Raditz. And Zarbon… I never truly believed he was purely evil. Or stupid, for that matter. I AM a bit confused on the timeline. When was this supposed to be taking place? It didn’t feel post-Buu, but that’s when I truly believed that Goku and Vegeta could work together… or even stand the sight of each other. Oh, well.

Until next time.

I loved it! Goku and Raditz got the chance to work things out!

Raditz does look pretty cool. This is not too bad. I like it.

great fic! i think u managed to capture all the characters nicely! i really like vegeta's explaination of why he killed nappa. )

wow_ i like that it was VERY good. you showed Goku's and Radizu's reunion very well! it is almost exsactly like i always invesened it! keep wrighting!

Ja ne!

That was interesting. I liked it, a bit diffrent. But in a good way, I promise you! I liked it.

Blessed Be,

Amy