...o.0; Uhm...it is a creative idea, but...Chichiri is supposed to be a monk; they're celibate. And he's really shy; I'm sorry, I guess it just shocked me at first to see 'Chiri being so...straight forward. You write very well, though I don't mean to diss your writing; it's really good. I enjoyed the first chapter; I look forward to more. Jaa!

Aww! :)