so i realize this fic was posted over 5 years ago lol but its great. and you probably know more spanish know but i'm a spanish major and i have to help lol. 'i am bored' is soy aburrido. normally aburridado would be correct because -ado is the -ed ending so i would have created that word too hehe. And i like Nire's spanglish

I dont Know if youll ever read this but I was reading your chapter four authors notes and I just Had to write to you. I LOVE FARSCAPE! Its one of my favore shows, and whats more scorpius is my favorite charater! is is a bit like lacoux I suppose. Have you seen the last episode? to be continued, well appariently there gonna make a mini series or somthing similare *jump for joy* any way your the only other person Ive ever "met" who likes scorpius, its nice to know there IS someone else. I love your stories, I hated the way it all ended and yours is the best continueation I have yet to enconter, good Idea actually to make last Knight a dream, Your storys well writen too, nice and smooth. so ah great stories, gret taste!
Silent Storms

Well I have saved my comments until I read the whole thing, and I loved every chapter. THis was a great story and plot line, you are great. THe love was well put.. Congrats~
Mindy

I liked it. I'm not familiar with Forgoteen Realms but I was able to follow it very well. And I liked Abel.

Finally, the end of the line for this well written story.

Thanks for the end of story comment, I'm glad that I was able to help somewhat with my couple of reviews. I don't review stories that often, except in rare cases when I think that the author has deserved a favorable comment.

Actually, I had forgotten about Tracy and Vachon being in the story, they kind of "flew off" in the middle of the story.

With the translation, I used an online translator, as I really don't know Spanish, but, I checked a couple variations and the translation came up exactly the same.

I look forward with great interest for a sequel to this story.

Yay!

Okay, now where's the rest of it? I want Fleur!

Good job, Nire!

Pax,
~Rouen French

She'd make a damn good mother? O, is this foreshadowing? I hope, I hope, I hope!

::goes to read next chapter::

Pax,
~Rouen

Hey, cool, a chapter I didn't read in advance! This was really very good; I especially liked the part about Fleur (of course), and while I personally don't think Nick is *that* slow on the uptake, I can certainly see him having that reaction to LaCroix's behavior!

Garder en haut le bon travail!

Pax,
~Rouen

Too lazy to login...
Thank Yous: Thanks to Carla, my beta. Thanks to Mike and April, who are the only people giving me good reviews.
I don't give good reviews? :( You're mean... I would like to know what they are doing... turning Able into a leopard?

*Sobs* I hate cliffhangers... *Sob* Why?! Update soon! (and i'm talking about The world is... too
-Randy

::read with a lisp:: "Marriage. Marriage is what brings us together today..." ;-P

They're getting married! Yay! Yummy chap, as usual. But too short! Now, where's my candy? I like Reese's Pieces. :-D

Pax,
~Rouen

I'm all for strong independent women and all and I do love your story, but is it ok if I don't like Nire? I have no forgotten realms background and you probably got her character pat down, as you did with the people in the FK universe, but her attitude just rankles a bit. Sorry!

YAY! GO NIRE! :( i couldn't find Vampire of the Mist (the Jander books for all you Jander people) by Christie Golden. F*ing hell. I don't know any used book stores!! Great chapter, but now i noticed you have imaginative titles. like "Chapter 20" wow... GREAT STORY

Hm...I looked up Forgotten Realms and found out it's a game with God's, heroes, and whatnot. Other than that, I'm still clueless over the characters so I kinda lost track of some of the story when you introduced Nire and Jander.

You hit the FK characters head on though! Nice job! And it certainly is an interessting plot. And from reading some reviews I'm guessing you hear this alot but I could've done without Nire or atleast a more toned down one. Oh well! Still looking forward to another installment!

Wish you could have given readers a little heads up on your story being a crossover because I was really enjoying it until Nire and Jander showed up then I got really confused because I know nothing about them or whatever show they were from.

Dispite that, I really like your story though I could live without Nire. I agree with some of the reviewers. She's just a little too much. Bossy and know-it-all. BTY if Nire and Jander have a home why have they taken over the loft?