yay! anpother best fic! and i love goku/haku! he's da best.. still sad that he changed a lot and surpresses his hnger.

you mean to say that this is the last chapter?! huh? the dragon, it took goku somewhere... and how did gyokuman survive? wierd... ahh... hope you continue this soon... he he he... yup... i agree. it does look like it's turning into a series... but no matter... all that yummy action... ha ha ha... i think it's pretty obvious i'm all hung up with action stuff... he he...

Hmm...very interesting chapter. I read all other chapters but sorry for the late review...if i get caught here in Heaven I'm dead meat...

Keep it up, and i'm glad you liked my gifts...not a word to anyone that i'm awake, okay? ^_^

Pls Pls Continue the excitement is getting to me pls Or i'll KILL YOU!(Just kidding I'm only Joking I'm Not forcing u or anyhing ok)Just to shorten my point it means This Ficcis is so Rad And cool! So pls pls pls pls Continue I beg u.

cool. ^^

continue soon!!

That was.ooh.
Great. Lucky i had a time off here in Tenkai to read this. My head spun, but great. Li Touten thinks i've gone crazy when he saw me gaping at the computer, but well.

Ja, i still have a mission to do. You know, yokai stuff. keep up, man.

Hiii!! Gomen.
In school now so cannot stay long...
As always...
Gabbatte!
ITs getting cooler and cooler!

Mei Cera a.k.a Gensui Meia

yup yup yup... this is longer than your others... but i love it... ha ha ha... hmmm... did kanzeon bosatsu find her brother??? so sad... one bright talent destroyed... sigh... hope you continue soon...

Mary sue? A character without flaws, usually culmination of what the author would like herself to *be* in her own fics, hence the term self-insertion. A good example: Minekura's own Kanzeon.
hehehe

mary sues is something like... um... imagine a woman who has Sanzo's traits all except she's a woman. sort of self insert characters.... i think... anyways, i haven't read you story yet. i just happened to read you question. i'll review after i read the whole thing off line. ^-^

aa, u continue it! ^^ Be reading it offline

There's so many of bad things happening, and how come Haku seemed to be the one who is aware of it.

That Sanzo...threatened Lirin with the curse of no meatbun.

Why Kanzeon should step in and say, "Lirin dear, for every prank you pull on Sanzo, I'll give you 5 MEATBUNS"

Seriously....what's the four tongue of fires meant?

WAAHOOO!!! Gabbatte!! ^^

oooh... so what has the four tongues of flame got to do with anything? hmmm... wonder what it symbolises? is it the four elements? wait. that don't sound right? bah... can't guess... hope i'll find out as i read on... nice one.

I'M SO SORRY!!!! I somehow missed out the sequel. my brain processes in weird, weird ways -_-;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;