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| Danny-171984 2003-09-25 ch 13,  | abuseNice dude BUT i have been waiting for the update. HURRY UP! Anyways...Keep on writing High Hopes Here Danny |
| OneAznDragon 2003-09-02 ch 15, | abuseOdd, doing an Ending before the stories even finished! |
| Chaladar 2003-05-07 ch 15, | abuseStop this story and I'll kill you! ...just joking :) |
| Killbot 10,000 2003-04-18 ch 15, anon. | abuseo, spooky |
| Carlos Negrao 2003-04-18 ch 15, anon. | abuseHey! Don't stop tjis fic like this, I hate when someone write a fic I like and then abandon the work. It's a good story, so it deserves be finished, ok? |
| hunter23 2003-04-17 ch 15, | abuseVery good Chapter and very interesting about how shinji is going to react. keep up the great work and evil cliffhanger. So is the sequel going to continue off from here? or are you going to put it so the sequel takes place at a later date? Keep up the great work! BTW I would miss the rest of the story if you are not going to finisht this one. |
| shane 2003-04-04 ch 14, anon. | abusedude i like the sory, its depressing and moody. perfict for evangelion. p.s. this is a two am posting sorry if i misworded something im tired |
| Shinji-Ikari-2040 2003-04-04 ch 1, | abusehey there, i like the begining of your story, but with me being the japanese fanatic that i am, i couldnt help but notice sum errors in your translation: "Ittekimasu - Literally it's "I'm going" but people usually say it when they leave home as a sort of good bye. Ittelashai - An answer to Ittekimasu. It would be what the people home would say to the person leaving. Gochisousama - An expression you say when you finish a meal. Itadakimasu is said when you start a meal." the translation i know it as is as follows: Itte kimasu - ( notice the space between the word)See you. I'm off now. Ittelashai - Good luck (and/or) have a nice day. Gochisousama - in exact translation it requires deshita at the end. it means That was delicous sorry if i seem a bit anal but im just a perfectionist ^-^;; |
| OneAznDragon 2003-04-03 ch 14, | abuseWow... I mean, at first I thought that it would suck... But damn... It was great... Shinji with a cold personalty like that... Damn... I love it... How the next chapter comes out soon. |
| arturus luminae 2003-03-29 ch 13, | abuseVery good in the plot line. Makes me remind of The One I Love Is... I just wished that Kat would be... um... Alive? That would really still stir up the storyline. But other than that, it is a pretty good fic to read lesiurely. I'll be sure watching for the next one! |
| Andross937 2003-03-17 ch 13, | abuseGreat job so far. This fic is great! I can already tell that it is well planned and thought out. Please continue it and post the next chapter soon. Please e-mail me when you do. andross937@yahoo.com Thanks! See ya! |
| Mchen 2003-03-13 ch 13, anon. | abusethis was a nice story! |
| ... 2003-03-11 ch 7, anon. | abuseNO, YOU KILLED HER!? HOW COULD YOU? Grr, ah! She's dead, and it's all your fault. Oh well, too bad, I liked her character a lot. Good story. |
| codemco 2003-03-11 ch 13, | abuseYes :) short but interresting like always :) so a good job must have some good reviews :)) I hope u will continue this way, u're great !! :)) Good job, writing and. ha i love Ayanami ^^;; |
| spriteh 2003-03-09 ch 13, | abuseyes. it is a bit short, but still good - i hope you keep writing it chill out - sprite |