Pretty good. I like your approach, and I like the fact that you pulled off a Ranma story without a major fight scene.

Needs some work on spelling and punctuation, but it's a good first draft.

Very good idea and superb execution!
More is definately required.

After reading I completely lost my breath. WOW is all I can say. This is like such a heartwarming and yet heartshattering triangle. Damn; the shy, sweet, sensitive type really gets to me.
And Ranma has no idea. WOW I wonder how this fanfic will end.so much drama.
Well I'm captivated by your story. Keep up the great work and update soon!

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This is a very good story. At first I had a bad feeling cause the briefing of the story didn't seem that good. But after I decided to check it out, I really like this story. A LOT. I just want you to try and change that little "sub" and then you'll have tons of readers flocking this story. Love it so far. Thanks for writing such a great story. Oh yea one more thing good characterization!

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Wow that is a really nice beginning. Damn this is the fiction that cost me most time. I should be doing HW right now but your fanfic is so splendid that I just can't tear away from it. Well Great job and update soon.

*curses himself for not being able to decide in doing HW or continue reading*

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Yeah, Ukyo and Shampoo probably aren't serious threats to Akane/Ranma, but that doesn't mean that Akane doesn't get jealous when they come on to him. Just a reminder.

Good story, but...a language can change a lot in 1500 years. (although their written language stayed exactly the same.)

Interesting. Your spelling isn't incorrect like everyone keeps saying. Your just using incorrect words. O.o

Re-read every word after running this through a spell checker next time and you'll catch all the slips that were made because of wrong words.

Keep writing, its a good story, though you might want to check for spelling.

This chapter has made waiting for it worthwhile.
I hope to see many more chapters coing out in the near future!

In the meantime, As I have been told many, many times, watchnyou spacing and punctuation. These things make it easier to read the fic.

Keep up the good work! Ja ne!

ranma and xiao should end up together

You really need to work on your spelling.

That was confuseing but not a bad idea in itself. It could have been better but i cant put into words how. So its probably not by much. But i liked it and im still hopefull that this will turn out to be a Ranma-Xiao fic, but thats up to you as the author. Keep up the good work.

Good! you finally added another chapter!
I'm glad that you added this, as you put it, "badly written fic" to the list! The interaction between Xiao and Akane clears up alot of questions about how the story will progress.
I eagerly await the next chapter!
Keep up the good work! Ja ne!

ranma/xaio pairing please and i can't wait to c the next chap.who's blood will it be? maybe moose's and somehow kuno and shampoo get together