beautiful terion.

Oh, this is going to be funny...

Well, good story all in all, I usually adore any Severus fic.

However:

I abhor any Harry/Ginny story. I'm amazed I actually read to the end.

The only thing I should warn you about for future stories is to keep your focus. At the beginning of the story it seemed alot like a Sev centered thing but then at the end it's all Harry Gin shit.

So ... yea, good stuff, you've got a good grasp on format.

Kirsten

Hey, this is the second time I've read this fic, didnt review the first time. Just thought that I'd say that I loved it, I remeber that much. Although, I read it so long ago that I dont remeber alot of things. Thus, reread!

*sniff* ...

-Peace.

Meep meep? Was is "he", the Roadrunner? Haha, this is AWESOME!

AWESOME! I love the whole thing. A very good take on Sev/Hermione. One of the best I've read in a while.

I LOKE THE FIRST ENDING BETTER! okay to start out this fic is a great twisting.. if i would not know better i would have thought you were J.K Rowling herself!

I love Sev as Ethan! His charater is great... i love how you made harry's eyes like they are! Also HEIR OF SLYTHERUN? i love it! i hope you write more fics!

Okay...

Lovwe the story even if you lost me at the end... What actually happened there? And Tristin is Sev and Hermie's son, right?

I truly enjoyed reading this, even when it confused the hell out of me.*runs off to look at all your other fanfics*

Ou-Know-Who? Shouldn't that be You-Know-Who. Other than that small error, this chapter is free from aything to criticise!

Captain One and Captain Two! *rolls eyes8 You are a maniac!

Those two are going to start something, aren't they?

Yay, chibi Snape!

i like it that harry is the head of slytherin nice story

Wonderful story! I liked the alternative ending!