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| Bonnie Mizuhara 2007-11-20 ch 1,  | abuseCould you continue please? This is really good! And I was kind of shocked/amused/happy when Jack said Empress. I think it fits :) So can you write more? I really like this!! |
| Thyone 2007-01-12 ch 1, | abuseAwwh ~ |
| KAKExORxDEATH 2006-12-28 ch 1, | abusei sense love in the air!! |
| brain melt 2006-09-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseI don't have anything bad to say about this fic...except to PLEASE UPDATE! I know that you've probably forgotten all about this fic or are too busy to do anything to it but PLEASE! *leaves lots of treats and bribes* |
| Bambi Dear 2006-06-05 ch 1, | abusedude that was SO awesome :D so cute! jus wat i needed after reading a bunch of angst ridden dark ralphxjack's n_n teehee great job, lovely. |
| The Mad Empty Shell 2006-04-02 ch 1, | abuseOMG LOL |
| Roxas4ever 2005-11-30 ch 1, | abuse*shivers* Well that was weird... |
| Yumenori 2005-11-25 ch 1, | abuseOmfg that was completly hot. We can all tell Jack would be the dominant one, lol. At first, I really didn't like the book, but then it got to be so gay sounding, I began to like it. Lol, good story! |
| She-who-must-not-be-named66... 2005-11-24 ch 1, | abusehehe i loved this! "We're all boys on this island. If any of us get married, it would have to be to a boy, wouldn't it?" haha so true, great writting and so cute. Favorite parts: the one up there ^ " I'm not giving you any food until you say you love me and you'll be my empress." "Jack was wrong," he told the filthy rocks around him. "Because if he kisses me again, I won't hate being his empress at all." please say you're going to continue this?? i'll just hope for that then |
| The Author That Never Was 2005-08-30 ch 1, | abuseLMFAO! That was cute. It really was. Ralph is an empress! That is so adorable. I really loved it, great job! |
| Secret Snoopy 2005-08-24 ch 1, | abuseI don't think there is a single thing to criticize (did I spell that right?) in this fic! It's absolutely perfect! *Grins happily* It was so cute and sweet and well written and wonderfully slash and... this sentence is NOT well-written... Yay! This was great! I'm going to add it to my favourites! :) |
| Selphiebunny 2005-07-17 ch 1, | abuseThis review is a bit late, haha but I just recently got into the Jack/Ralph pairing (and fell in love). If you ever get back into the LotF fandom, perhaps you might make a sequel? -puppy eyes- because this is brilliant. Jack is so perfectly in-character, and I loved when he ignored Ralph's comments because it was so true to him. Even though it's rather grim, it still has fluff and slight innocence in it. Amazing. -claps- I wish you'd consider writing a sequel... because I'd love to know what happens to poor Ralph with the whole empress thing. Cheers! |
| Kittengrl39 2005-06-11 ch 1, | abuseWha... wha... wha... *mind bleeds* @_@ |
| silver fox 5224 2005-05-16 ch 1, | abuseou!!~! i just cant wait till the next chap! that was so cool! update! |
| slashola 2005-04-12 ch 1, anon. | abusevery nice i really really REALLY love Ralph hes so cool you should do some more I'm looking forward to it |