Reviews for O'Neill and O'Neil

RyanKathrynCelia 2008-01-10 ch 2,	abuseVery good, and very enjoyable. Thanks for sharing.
Darth Tater 2005-10-24 ch 2,	abusenice. lol.
rolleson 2003-02-18 ch 2,	abusehee hee hee fantastic loved it ob
colombe.de.pluie 2003-01-05 ch 2, anon.	abuseReally cool story ! lol.
shiplover 2002-12-31 ch 1,	abusegreat! brill! great!
ladyhound 2002-12-30 ch 2, anon.	abusecute, very cute. i laughed out loud. really. i didn't just lol i tipped my head back and chuckled. keep up the good work.
dietcokechic 2002-12-30 ch 2,	abuseThat was cute.
Miscbills 2002-12-30 ch 2, anon.	abuseThat is so funny. I could see Daniel sitting looking confused, while Jack's eyes are bulging out. Jack's tale about his history with the other O'Neil is funny too.
dietcokechic 2002-12-30 ch 1,	abuseOh yeah! This is great!! Original, flirty and just the right amount of mystery. Please continue!!
Luna 2002-12-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseNot bad, but I'm going to suggest that you look at the tenses a little. For example, there's no such word and 'leaved' and 'they got issues' isn't proper englsih. The first should be replaced with 'left' and the second with 'they had/have issues.' Just a little constructive Criticism.
Misbills 2002-12-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat is a very good plot. I almost forgot about the O'Neill and O'Neil, and found your story hilarious. Jack using O'Neil as his scapegoat. shame, shame.
spunky panda 2002-12-29 ch 1, anon.	abusegreat story. evil sam is awsome.