 Adam Tuttle 12/30/02 . chapter 1Woah. First off, that read like a real episode from the first words to the last. You've got a real talent, luv.
The dream was perfect, making just enough sense mixed with nonsense to actually make, well, sense. Half expected to see that weird cheese guy standing about- Though, I'm glad I didn't, 'cus that would've been right pathetic, I think.
Now, the way I see it, you've got yourself another week before a new episode airs. Plenty of time to write more, flesh the idea out, wouldn't you say?
I'll be waiting.
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