ARGH! why haven't you updated?! this fic is AWESOME! one of the best seifer/selphie fic ever!

And I absolutely LOVE seifer in this fic! He's so great!

AND I HOPE YOU GIVE QUISTIS A HAPPY ENDING! she deserves love and happiness too!

what happened to screwing everything else?! updates man!

You have to finish this! Or at least tell me who the killer is! :)

wow ... intense ... and suspenseful.
and it reminds me a bit of the hannibal lecter series.
i hope you haven't forgotten about this story; it's so gripping!

UPDATE!

OMG IM SORRY I MEANT VERDANII

I agree with Verdana?...
WHOS THE KILLER!
..UPDATE

WHAT HAPPENED?! I WILL KILL HIM!...I don't even know who it was but hurting QUISTIS LIKE THAT?! ...and she's ALIVE! FRIGGIN HELL!

Cute, Chickie. Really.

Seifer...*drools*

This is cute.

Whoa. Nifty.

That was really good, Chickie. Nice job.

*bangbang!* ...I just shot Irvine. I think I missed. Yeah. Poopie.

Anyway, nice chapter. Chickie.

Poopie. Kinda reminds me of The Cell. But that's only cause I say it like two days ago. Hehe.

Nifty ficcy, Chickie.

“Did you just hear the sound of a man’s soul being ripped in two?” Zell asked as he munched on a hotdog.

Irvine raised his eyebrow at Zell, “You mean the scream?”

...That was NEAT-oh! Anway, nice start.