The author's notes right in the middle of the story are terrible, and interrupt what would otherwise be a potentially good plot line.

Admittedly, you write fanfiction for fun and don't owe anything to anyone, not even your readers. Keep the author's notes where they are, if you wish. But if your goal is to lure in readers (and writers) of a higher caliber, to read and enjoy your story, please submit to convention.

No author of any decent standard flings in author's notes for a 'joke', for a 'prank', at their sister's suggestion - and by the way, if your sister did suggest it, congratulate her. She single handedly managed to throw me off of reading what seemed to be a promising story.

So I like this story and it seems fairly well written but the notes u left in several places in the midst of it were really annoying. They interrupt the flow of the fic.

When you spelled the cat's name, is that meant to be the phoenetic spelling of Mestopheles?

Er, I feel like I'm review-spamming you, but that doesn't make sense to me. That Snape is teaching him because he is the only person on the staff who is left handed. Since he's left-handed, wouldn't that feel natural-shouldn't it be some who is 'ambidexterous'?

Ha, oh my gosh, Shredder! Go TMNT! lol.

That's terrible; what happened to him. It's a good story, but at times I feel like I want to cry for Harry.

Awesome. :)

It is really good! But I'm sorry I can't finish it... I keep on bursting into tears. :(

What the blazes?? Ask for help Harry! At the bank!

Superb start!

Keep up the good work!

Fantastic Story, well written :) Though you might want to mark the story as Complete since it is finished, or seems to be atleast.

Have fun with whatever you are up to now and good luck

Decent story, however, a few things are too apparent to not comment on.
A) Harry goes to Diagon Alley, full of completely competent witches and wizards and he doesn't start yelling like a madman? Would a muggle honestly stand a change against that?

B) The authors notes are completely out of hand. Having them smack in the middle of the story is annoying and distracting. Try writing your story and let it be just that, the story. We don't need your silly little comments or designs halfway through the chapter. How much time did you waste in chapter 4 doing your pyramid? I skipped ahead and realized that they aren't present in future chapters. I daresay you may want to go back and remove the idiotic notes you have strategically place in the center of the chapters earlier in the story.

As it stands now, I won't be continuing on this story. I could give it a chance but it's far too juvenile with your comments thrown helter skelter throughout the chapters.

I don't mean for you take this as a flame or whatever, you should just think of the reading pleasure of your fans. We read these stories for our pleasure, not to be the butt of your practical jokes.

Well done.

This isn't being mean, or "haha I've put a cliffie in" this is just plain ANNOYING. get the act together. I think this could be a good story, your style is good but stop that nonsense in any further stories, I fear I wont be able to change anything in this one anymore, well, we'll have to make do.