She wasn't...Oh, dang it! Anyway, this was still funny, even if you did put it in the 'drama' category, and it was in your usual sarcastic style, which I find enjoyable and poignant at the same time. Keep it up. Oh yeah, I know that voting is closed but...ring again!

Damn, he called. At least she wasn't home...

Voting is officially closed, and this isn't being run out of Florida, so it's all set. (P.S. I had two opposing ideas in my head, so I would've kept the story going whether it was yes or no.)

He should call her

Call her! Call her, call her. BTW, good fic.

Hell, no.

Oy, of course... that sucks booty that he's stuck in Esthar... you'd think that the government and his dad could get the boy a decent job! LOL, am I the only other FF8 player who thinks Squall and Selphie slept together besides you?

Call her! Call her!

he should call her. zell a religious non-asskickin, non swearin man, i dont see how, well he still rules!:)

I like it, i found myself getting swept away in the plot, you provide a good story line, a unique after-the-fact story, it's nice to see the downside of things for a change rather than everyone being worshiped as heros. Have squall call her, keep the story going

Get him to call her

Of course he should call Rinoa...you silly boy.

Very interesting. I've never seen it from this possibility before... Though Squall was the commander of Garden... But it's got a very interesting plot, and you've got a unique writing style. Keep writing, and I'll definitely keep reading. And no, he shouldn't call Rinoa, but that's just me.